Hi, I love this story! It would be great if you continue writing it, I would like to know how it continues.
Thanks for share so beautiful story.
My regards.
| Title: Harshness and Gentleness (Part II)
| 18 Oct 2016 10:44 pm
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| Reviewer: ohreally86 (Signed)
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I just started reading this story after a year's absence...and I blew through it, wow, what a great story, characters sufficiently in character with room to realistically grow...very well written...I can't say it enough...WOW, WOW, WOW, can't wait for the next installment. Watch out for grammar errors and some sentence structure bloopers, but otherwise, GREAT JOB!!! Keep it coming!!!*
| Title: Sadness
| 05 Jun 2016 12:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Jess (Anonymous)
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When can we expect new chapter?
| Title: Chapter 1
| 08 May 2016 7:45 am
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| Reviewer: Samantha (Anonymous)
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Amazing story! I can't wait to read more!
I think the saddest part about the death is that there is a room with his name on it... and a never slept-in bed. How Malfoy got into the house past a fidelus charm, I don't really understand. I can understand Narcissa being able to get through, being a Black herself... but her husband...? As the summer goes on, and Harry reaps the rewards of 'living' in such a 'loving home'... I can easily see Snape's lessons 'running late' so that it would just be rude to not stay for dinner as well. That would get at least one meal into the boy a week. I want to see Harry cook for Snape. I have no doubt he's better over a stove than a cauldron.
| Title: Sadness
| 02 May 2016 8:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much a sad but in way a comforting chapter
This new chapter is wonderful-- I like the consistent characterization of him as thoughtful and compassionate, but awkward expressing emotions that aren't anger.
I hope he gets away from the Dursley's soon.
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