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Title: Verboseness 21 Jul 2013 2:39 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Looking forward to more. Can't wait. Update soon.
Title: Drunkenness 18 Jul 2013 9:36 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice, nice story so far. You've made Snape understanding Harry very believable and I really like the way that you've brought Severus and Sirius together.

    Great job!!!!!
Title: Drunkenness 16 Jul 2013 7:36 am
Reviewer: Kendra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Impresionante, genial como has podido conectar un punto entre los dos, es decir, amigos y con su lealtad feroz, sencillamente genial, porque ahora no estan tan solos y poseen el mismo interes en Harry, me encanto, hermosamente escrito
Title: Drunkenness 16 Jul 2013 5:13 am
Reviewer: JulieRickman (Signed) [Report This]
    fue un schock esta conversaciĆ³n, pero muy buena en realidad, se lo merecian. excelente capĆ­tulo.
Title: Drunkenness 15 Jul 2013 1:52 pm
Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I would have thought there was no way of Severus and Sirius ceasing being enemies and find some common ground but you made it possible, in a very believable way, with some lack of sleep and firewhiskey, thank you!
Title: Drunkenness 15 Jul 2013 5:32 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a fun chapter. I really enjoyed Snape and Sirius bonding over fire whiskey. They seem to have come to terms which is nice. Harry needs them both in his life and not at each other's throats. Though I did wonder if Snape would be in any condition to teach afterwards.
Title: Drunkenness 14 Jul 2013 8:53 pm
Reviewer: Voidheart (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Just wanted to congratulate you on a very well written chapter. I always cringe at Severus/Sirius friendships because most people make the transition from enemy to friend instant and complete without taking into account their history and what might actually be strong enough to draw them together. You've done a beautiful job making it uncomfortable for them and entirely believable.
    I look forward to reading more of your work.
Title: Drunkenness 14 Jul 2013 12:18 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    it was nice to see sev and sirius talkin

    great chapter
Title: Drunkenness 14 Jul 2013 11:40 am
Reviewer: MJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It is rare that I read fanfics that are not already completed as I am a very impatient individual; your story is one of my only exceptions. The characters are written so spot-on and the story is so brilliant and original that I can hardly wait to see where you take it! I am eagerly and hungrily awaiting your next chapter! Keep it up!
Title: Drunkenness 14 Jul 2013 10:38 am
Reviewer: GreyPilgrim (Signed) [Report This]
    Surprisingly believable for a "Sirius and Severus stop hating each other so much" chapter. Good work!

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