Potions and Snitches
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Title: Blackness 29 Jun 2013 9:03 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't know why but I get the feeling that Umbridge did something to Harry that caused the connection to finally break and he collapsed. I can just see her smirk.
    I want to read Snapes, Umbridges, and the classes reaction to him screaming and collapsing. Are you going to write about it in the next chapter?
    I like the way Snape took care of him instead of sending him to the infirmary. Took care of him like a father would :)
Title: Blackness 29 Jun 2013 7:56 am
Reviewer: JulieRickman (Signed) [Report This]
    mur cortito pero sigue interesante
Title: Blackness 29 Jun 2013 6:54 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Poor Harry.

    Lol Snape was pretty patient, considering that Harry vomited on his floor!

    Umbridge is a toad. Grrr...

    Great job. Can't wait for more.
Title: Kindness 28 Jun 2013 3:49 pm
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    That was cute..the scene with Jack and Harry
Title: Kindness 28 Jun 2013 2:39 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it. Looking forward to more. Update soon
Title: Solitariness 28 Jun 2013 2:32 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Umbridge is one of the characters I detest the most in all of the Harry Potter series. Nasty woman. Love it.
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jun 2013 2:28 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting beginning.
Title: Kindness 28 Jun 2013 12:14 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the scene with Jack thank you
Title: Solitariness 28 Jun 2013 12:04 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter Umbridge being as lovely as ever
Title: Chapter 1 27 Jun 2013 11:52 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the mixture of humour and angst thank you

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