Well, I really liked it. As I have read plenty of fanfics, I do have a right to say that this is a good one. Good luck!
I'm really enjoying this so far. Good job!
Love it!!! And Snape gets to see the other side of Harry. Well done. I am so glad that Snape was able to rescue Jack! The poor child! Great scene. Love your Snape. :) All your characters were well done. Thanks for writing and sharing!
Wow, Umbridge ick! Of course she would catch Harry. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Beautiful chapter! I love how Dumbledore told Snape to grow up. You did it in such a way that still respected Severus. Well done. Great start!
I love this so far. Is Jack going to come back after this? Maybe come to Harry for advice or protection against Umbridge?
| Title: Kindness
| 25 Jun 2013 5:57 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra (Anonymous)
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Bueno, en realidad no tengo un momento libre deberia estar haciendo un informe d de desarrollo de mis estudiantes a la delegación municipal, pero en fin.......... este finc, es encantador, simplemente es una idea maravillosa, realmente espero que lo continues, porque es muy muy grato de leerlo,
felicidades por una buena idea
| Title: Kindness
| 25 Jun 2013 5:16 am
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| Reviewer: juli (Anonymous)
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me encanta tu historia, espero pronto other chapter
If I was a teacher at Hogwarts I would write to Fudge and say I never knew you let your staff use ILLEGAL blood quills on students or on people period. I am ashamed to think that the minster has fallen so low as to hire someone like that and have them teach children.
Signed Anonymous
Then I would send a copy to Rita Skeeter and then we will see how the Parents feel about all this and Watch Umbridge and Fudge suffer muhahahahaha
Do you know how many times I wished that the Centaurs that took her away near the end of this year had killed her. Oh I wish my prayers had come true
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