| Title: Drunkenness
| 08 Nov 2015 8:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well done with Severus and Sirius. Their care of Harry bringing them together is so well done in your universe thank you.
| Title: Sickness
| 08 Nov 2015 7:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well done loved the Lilly images and how the two were merged thank you
| Title: Blackness
| 07 Nov 2015 9:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well done as not too OOC but showing concern thank you
| Title: Kindness
| 07 Nov 2015 8:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved Severus having a go at Umbridge, great!
| Title: Solitariness
| 07 Nov 2015 7:54 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good chapter thank you
| Title: Chapter 1
| 07 Nov 2015 7:49 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you, I think I have read this but not sure so will read again, I love Dumbledore's lecture
| Title: Sickness
| 05 Nov 2015 6:25 am
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| Reviewer: JAWorley (Anonymous)
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I could really feel how awkward he felt there at the end almost as though he were trying to comfort himself and tell himself it was alright.
Twice in this CH you said 'curse through'. I just wanted to mention that the term is 'course'. 'It coursed through his veins...'. Otherwise I'm really enjoying the story and your writing.
Staying with Snape will be better than the Dursleys though Harry probably can't see it right now. And since Severus and Sirius had become friends, Snape will at least be sympathetic.
| Title: Abruptness
| 03 Nov 2015 10:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Orange_Panda (Anonymous)
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OMG! that was so sad...I just read all your chapters! Sirius dying was so unexpected...poor harry. I can't wait for the next chaper-when will you roughly update again? I'm in suspense
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