Title: Hopelessness
| 31 Jan 2015 10:29 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter love the interaction with Severus and Harry thank you
What a chapter! Breathtaking action and wonderful ending filled with emotions while Snape takes care of Harry. Just can't wait for another one! Thanks for sharing!!!
That was an emotional chapter. Sirius was so courageous while he was being tortured. Reading it made me sad. Poor Harry. No wonder he was devastated. I'm glad that Snape managed to stretch himself emotionally to be comforting to him.
Umbridge should be lucky that no one like me went to Hogwarts. I'm American, black, protective of children, and violent. It would not have ended well for her. :)
I can understand Snape's point of view, being someone who doesn't forgive easily, but I would still feel the tiniest bit bad for the ones I hated if they died while a lived. Well, only for like a second. I haven't been through the level of bullsh*t that Snape has.
So I was at the dentist when I got to this chapter and it helped get my mind off of the whole thing which I thank you for.;) and I haven't felt this kind of anxious dread since reading the canon death of Sirius in the books. Very great writing and believable character development!! I hope you update soon. I can't imagine what may happen next!:D
Title: Hopelessness
| 30 Dec 2014 5:57 pm
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Reviewer: Marthelia Sparks (Anonymous)
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Intense chapter, compassionate and loving Snape,just luv it! Waiting for more:-)
*sniff sniff* Sirius!!!! noo!!!!
Title: Hopelessness
| 30 Dec 2014 5:47 am
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Reviewer: A complete fan (Anonymous)
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Oh my God. This chapter... I'm tearing up. Poor Sirius! Poor Harry! Poor Snape!!!I just wanna hug'em all so bad right now! Please upload another chapter soon!
Title: Hopelessness
| 29 Dec 2014 11:12 pm
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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This is the first fan fiction I have read from this site and it made a very good impression. I loved the conflicted emotions in this and how realistic it was. You are an amazing writer. I was crying at the end of this. The ending was heartbreaking, but I give you my respect since not a lot of people kill Sirius when they don't have to.
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