Very moving and action-packed chapter. Well done.
Omg this is amazing! I started reading this today and couldn't stop until I was all up to date on your chapters! I loooove that way you've developed the characters - and surprisingly, although I've never imagined Sirius and Severus being able to be written as friends convincingly, you've made it work really well!
Can't wait for your next update :)
too bad the dementors didn't go have the toad. We all know she deserves it
| Title: Protectiveness (Part 1)
| 12 Sep 2013 12:06 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the blasting of the wall and the Slytherin scene, great fun thank you
I love this chapter. Never have I seen such a perfect, awkward, yet healing moment between Snape and Sirius. This was brilliant.
Also, I'd venture to say that all fanfiction is OOC since those authors aren't the author. Much of the time, I find that FF authors explore characters far better than the original. :3
Still, I thought this was a well done chapter and I can just imagine Snape being rigid in his seat while getting drunk with Sirius. Too funny a picture. ^^
| Title: Drunkenness
| 07 Sep 2013 11:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Tia (Anonymous)
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That is probably the best scene I have read of Black and Snape forgiving each other and finding common ground.... Brilliant
Good Work!! Very Exciting.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! Do you know how much I HATE Umbridge. I hate her with a passion. Also, why did Sirius have to be so stupid when it comes to Peter and here I thought he would be freed not about to die.
| Title: Impulsiveness
| 22 Aug 2013 3:03 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great take on the canon version! I liked the cliff hanger!
I like that Snape and Sirius have become good enough friends that they are hanging out together. It must have been a surprise for Harry though. Speaking of surprises, I certainly didn't expect to have Peter come though the floo in his rat form. Can't wait to find out why.
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