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Reviews For The Tortured Soul
Title: What happened to listening at the door? 29 Jun 2013 11:39 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great starter interesting what will come out at the first lesson

    Author's Response: Thanks very much for commenting! :-)
Title: What happened to listening at the door? 28 Jun 2013 1:49 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    interesting cant wait for the next chapter

    very well written, also who has sev's soul and how were the soul's switched??

    Author's Response:

    Things will become clearer in the next few chapters. :-) 

    Thanks very much for commenting! :-) 

Title: What happened to listening at the door? 28 Jun 2013 2:53 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting first chapter. I'm looking forward to finding out how this happened. It will be hard for Harry to accept that his dad isn't alive as he thinks though. He already has forgotten parts of the conversation he overheard. Severus was told by Dumbledore not the other way around.

    Author's Response:

    Ah yes. That conversation was a lot to take in, so I figured he'd be bound to get details confused. Plus - and it's an interesting thing in canon - Harry naturally is suspicious of Snape, to the extent that (in canon) it's amazing the sheer amount of evidence he sweeps aside that Snape is on the Order's side.

    I'm so glad you liked it. :-) Thanks so much for your interesting comment!

Title: What happened to listening at the door? 28 Jun 2013 1:52 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm very intrigued. So is Snape still Snape, even though he has James' soul inside him?

    Ooh, I can't wait for more. Very anxious to see where you are going with this.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Snape is very much still Snape. :-) I wanted to see if, and how, I could make that work.

    Thanks so much for commenting. :-) I really appreciate it.

Title: What happened to listening at the door? 28 Jun 2013 12:20 am
Reviewer: anathi (Signed) [Report This]
    Very unique and well-written! I feel sad for Snape now, but hopefully things'll get better. I wonder if Harry will be able to keep his knowledge of the truth from Snape during Occlumency.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks very much! I'm afraid things don't get much better very soon - I'm a bit of a fan of conflict, so they'll get worse before then - but I hope that won't put you off! I can't stand a story without a decent payoff in the end, and I think, I hope, this has got one of those. :-)

    Occlumency - love writing those scenes. *drools over Snape-Harry confrontations*

    Thank you so much for commenting! :-)


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