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Reviews For The Tortured Soul
Title: Deceit 18 Jul 2013 11:27 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good interaction between Remus and Severus thank you

    Author's Response: Thank *you* for commenting! :-)
Title: Deceit 14 Jul 2013 2:23 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the interchange between Harry and Draco at the beginning of the chapter. It sounded exactly like the two of them would argue. It sounds like Snape's dreams will be getting worse if he is beginning to remember. I wonder if Harry will stumble on anything during his occlumency lessons?

    Author's Response: Thank you for your interesting comments, as always! The next chapter is more of an Occlumency lesson, though it's mostly to clear up a gap in the plot vs canon. But on the plus side, plenty of Harry-Snape interaction! :-)

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