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Reviews For The Tortured Soul
Title: Deceit 14 Jul 2013 2:23 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the interchange between Harry and Draco at the beginning of the chapter. It sounded exactly like the two of them would argue. It sounds like Snape's dreams will be getting worse if he is beginning to remember. I wonder if Harry will stumble on anything during his occlumency lessons?

    Author's Response: Thank you for your interesting comments, as always! The next chapter is more of an Occlumency lesson, though it's mostly to clear up a gap in the plot vs canon. But on the plus side, plenty of Harry-Snape interaction! :-)
Title: Restored to life 14 Jul 2013 12:21 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a good chapter with plenty of dialogue

    Author's Response: Thank you for your comment! Plenty dialogue coming in the next chapter too. :-)
Title: Restored to life 14 Jul 2013 12:21 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a good chapter with plenty of dialogue

    Author's Response: Thank you for your comment! Plenty dialogue coming in the next chapter too. :-)
Title: Restored to life 08 Jul 2013 10:48 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    It sounds like Harry may have mastered some parts of occlumency if all Snape gets from his mind is the image of the dog and nothing else. I wonder if Harry will view Snape differently after viewing the memory. He isn't viewing James the same way. I'm looking forward to finding out what Severus comment about being restored to life is about, too.

    Author's Response:

    Snape was a poor teacher, that can't be denied. But give Harry (or anyone) a really good incentive, and they'll achieve anything.

    Re Snape being restored to life - it isn't pretty, as Snape's imagination will testify in the next chapter. 

    Thank you for commenting! I really do appreciate it. :-) 

Title: What happened to listening at the door? 29 Jun 2013 11:39 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great starter interesting what will come out at the first lesson

    Author's Response: Thanks very much for commenting! :-)
Title: What happened to listening at the door? 28 Jun 2013 1:49 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    interesting cant wait for the next chapter

    very well written, also who has sev's soul and how were the soul's switched??

    Author's Response:

    Things will become clearer in the next few chapters. :-) 

    Thanks very much for commenting! :-) 

Title: What happened to listening at the door? 28 Jun 2013 2:53 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting first chapter. I'm looking forward to finding out how this happened. It will be hard for Harry to accept that his dad isn't alive as he thinks though. He already has forgotten parts of the conversation he overheard. Severus was told by Dumbledore not the other way around.

    Author's Response:

    Ah yes. That conversation was a lot to take in, so I figured he'd be bound to get details confused. Plus - and it's an interesting thing in canon - Harry naturally is suspicious of Snape, to the extent that (in canon) it's amazing the sheer amount of evidence he sweeps aside that Snape is on the Order's side.

    I'm so glad you liked it. :-) Thanks so much for your interesting comment!

Title: What happened to listening at the door? 28 Jun 2013 1:52 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm very intrigued. So is Snape still Snape, even though he has James' soul inside him?

    Ooh, I can't wait for more. Very anxious to see where you are going with this.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Snape is very much still Snape. :-) I wanted to see if, and how, I could make that work.

    Thanks so much for commenting. :-) I really appreciate it.

Title: What happened to listening at the door? 28 Jun 2013 12:20 am
Reviewer: anathi (Signed) [Report This]
    Very unique and well-written! I feel sad for Snape now, but hopefully things'll get better. I wonder if Harry will be able to keep his knowledge of the truth from Snape during Occlumency.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks very much! I'm afraid things don't get much better very soon - I'm a bit of a fan of conflict, so they'll get worse before then - but I hope that won't put you off! I can't stand a story without a decent payoff in the end, and I think, I hope, this has got one of those. :-)

    Occlumency - love writing those scenes. *drools over Snape-Harry confrontations*

    Thank you so much for commenting! :-)


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