Excellent 2 chapters. Loved the reunion with Ben, but the letters from Severus's father are perfect. Not overly sentimental, just brutally open. Good stuff.
Author's Response: Hello! I am so glad you enjoyed the past two chapters, especially Tobias' letters! They were really hard to write, trying to keep them believeable and all. So thank you so much for sharing your sentiments!
Hello Whitetail! I missed you and the story of course, amazing chapter, dangerously close to the waterworks again, but I managed to resist, maybe as Severus pondered about him missing Lily and possibly finally starting to move on, I too am starting to move on from the empathy this story provokes in me. I can't wait until the next chapter whenever that will be. Keep up the good work!
-Sev
Author's Response: Hi there! Great to hear you are still enjoying things. Next chapter should be up on Monday evening. Or at least that's what I'm shooting for. Now that I'm through midterms, I have a bit of free time again, thankfully. Thanks for sharing your thoughts - always glad to hear them!
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| 30 Oct 2013 11:55 am
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Loved the contrast between the happy Harry part of the chapter and the bittersweet tissue alert letters section.
Author's Response: It is great to hear you liked the variation of the emotion in this chapter! ;)
| Title: Of Letters Never Sent
| 29 Oct 2013 9:55 pm
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| Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous)
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What a beautiful and tragic chapter. Ben telling tales on Severus to Harry was the humor that lightened it, but the letters from Severus' dad were a 2-box tearfest.
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you liked Ben's tales! I thought this chapter needed a little bit of fun to contrast the letters. Two boxes, wow, that sad, huh? Well, it's good to know they hit the mark, then. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Cannot wait for more
Author's Response: Holy toast batman - talk about fast reading. Great to hear from you cara-tanaka!
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