Nice neat finish to the story. I do like a happy, or at least hopeful, ending. While perhaps not my favourite of your stories from a chapter by chapter light entertainment POV, it has been interesting, well written and a little different. I'm really looking forward to rereading the whole story in one hit when I get a free evening, as I'm sure that will be worthwhile. Thanks for your hard work.
Author's Response: Hi! Great to hear you liked the ending. Yeah, this story *was* very different from my usual stuff, but it is nice to hear that you still found it interesting. ;) Yeah, I think this story would be a lot better when read in one go, just because of the action. You are very welcome, rosina, and thank you for your detailed reviews! Cheers!
I have tears runing down my face. Thank you for this story, it´s beautiful :.)
Author's Response: It is wonderful to know that you found this story so powerful. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Hi Whitetail! Amazing last chapter -- what a solemn, bittersweet and powerful way to end this great and quite exceptional story! Thank you for writing and sharing it!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for reviewing, Annora. I am pleased that you found the ending so powerful - it wasn't easy to write! You are very welcome, and I would like to thank you for reading For Valour and taking time to review. ;) Cheers!
| Title: For Life
| 05 Nov 2013 11:07 am
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| Reviewer: Gillian (Anonymous)
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Loved it
Author's Response: Thanks for your review Gillian!
| Title: For Life
| 05 Nov 2013 7:30 am
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| Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous)
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I'm glad Severus found a flat near his mother, so he and Harry could spend more time with her.
Great story! Loved it!
Author's Response: Hi bianca! I am so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reviewing! ;)
Cheers Whitetail! I'll leave a proper review later when I can compose myself for words, but rest assured this is quite simply Fantastic!
Author's Response: Thanks Sev! Great to hear that you enjoyed it. I would be simply tickled pink if you add more to your comments! Thanks for all of your reviews throughout this story! ;) They've been a treat.
Beautiful
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
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