| Title: On Snape's Terms
| 16 Nov 2013 11:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very interesting start to a story
Well I did not see that coming! I can't even say Snape is out of character, because as far as he said, almost everything we know about him is a lie! How interesting! I really look forward to where this goes. I liked the comment about McGonagall and having favourites, and I really am enjoying your dialogue. Cheers!
Ooh no wonder Snape's in a bad mood! What an interesting twist - Petunia not being related by blood! I can't say I've seen it done before. An intriguing story, no doubt. Your writing style has caught my eye, and I enjoyed the conversation between Dumbledore and Severus. It seemed to create an illusion of depth in regards to their relationship. Hmm ... onward.
wow I was going to say that it sounds like Severus is Harry's dad and then I decided to go back and read the description and sure enough it looks like he is. Harry will end up staying with him huh.
I wonder if Lily and Snape kept it hidden from everyone even Dumbledore or maybe just Lily and Severus doesn't know and will find out with a blood test or something.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
lol I don't know why people didn't send the "gifts" in the book. It would have been just as funny as, well you adding it.
| Title: On Snape's Terms
| 14 Nov 2013 7:34 am
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| Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous)
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Very good. Hope you continue this.
| Title: On Snape's Terms
| 14 Nov 2013 5:32 am
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| Reviewer: Twonky (Anonymous)
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Intriguing. I'm looking forward to more.
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