| Title: Personal Spaces
| 25 Jan 2014 9:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love "Merlin's hangnails" a great change from Merlin's pants! Thank you a well constructed chapter
Author's Response: Hee! I came up with "Merlin's hangnails!" a couple of years ago and have actually used it in several stories! It seems such a "Snape-ish" saying, and a far cry from the more typical "Merlin's beard!" epithet. None of my other characters will ever use it-- just Snape! Thanks for the review! :-)
HAHAHA! goodness me I laughed so hard at the end of this :D it was Skeeter Independent that did it! That's genius! I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, well done once again! And it was nice to have an appearance from Snape. Awesome chapter shadow!
Author's Response: I just HAD to do it! Hee! The bug didn't strike me as the type to keep working as merely a gossip columnist for the rest of her career! Plus, it was an angle I'd never seen done before, so I was hoping it would be original and humorous! Thanks for letting me know it worked! And yes! Our fave Potions Master is still among us! Yay! ;-D
Awesome Shadow! I really enjoyed this chapter! Perfect job! Hehehehehehehe the ending to this chapter was perfect! Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! But don't forget-- the best-laid plans can go awry! And nothing is ever certain when it comes to Dumbledore, even in portrait form... Glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks for the review! :-)
Wonderful chapter. I loved how you introduced/expanded on the characters -all of it interesting, nothing feeling superfluous. Nice to see a Snape with just a few of the sharp edges smoothed off too! Looking forward to the next chapter to see how everyone gets on with solving the multiple mysteries. (If I was really being forced to nitpick and prove I was paying attention I would say I don't think Blackpool is a city - but who cares, except maybe some of its residents!)
Author's Response: *sighs* I knew I should've gone with Bristol... But do you realize how small England really is? Seriously! I was looking at a map & it was so hard to find two sizeable locales over 100 miles apart! (No wonder Great Britain wanted to develop a worldwide empire!) After I read your comment, I Googled Blackpool (!) & found the population exceeded 142,000 -- in the US, we have cities 1/8 that size! I'd literally based my selection on the size of the letters in the name!!! Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and many thanks for reviewing! Rest assured, the plot will continue to thicken! ;-D
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