| Title: Confessions and Revelations
| 26 Jan 2014 12:27 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Another greT ending thank you you have caught all the characters so well
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment! I am really trying to keep all of the characters in character throughout. It's a bit easier with Sherlock and John (except for the fact that they're a bit out of their depth in the Wizarding world) because they are contemporary characters. The Potter cast is a bit of a stretch, since they've aged 15 years since Voldemort's defeat. I have to believe their basic personalities would stay the same, but putting them into their adult roles (in their early 30's) takes some serious consideration at times! Thanks for the review!
| Title: Confessions and Revelations
| 19 Jan 2014 12:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
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I'm loving this :D the dialogue, mannerisms, everything! It feels like it could be real! Haha poor John the Muggle, that did make me laugh :D
Author's Response: Wowwwwww!!! What a tremendous compliment! "It feels like it could be real!" That's one of the nicest things anyone has ever said about my writing! I do work at it, but unless someone tells me so, I'm always wondering if it's coming across as well as I hoped it would! So thank you VERY much for letting me know! ... btw, John will have further adventures in the Magical world! Hee!
| Title: Confessions and Revelations
| 18 Jan 2014 11:42 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Good descriptions of the surroundings, and you made all the background explanations and introductions interesting. So, Sherlock was born in 1987. looks like Dumbledore did do the tampering.
Author's Response: Whew! Thanks for the compliment ("interesting"); I know that John and Sherlock are getting hit with major information overload, and I was hoping that Potter readers (who already know all this) wouldn't be bored with the detailed recap! And yes-- Dumbledore is looking more suspect all the time... Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Hehe I love this and lol I've wondered why they carried keys as well
Author's Response: I decided the Muggles would ask the obvious question -- why keys? -- so I went ahead and answered it, incorporating a bit of humor in the process. Since Hermione is Muggle-born, I figured she'd be the obvious person to pose the question, since she knows full well that Wizards don't "need" keys! Thanks for the review! :-)
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