Aggghhh no! I thought this said to be continued! *cries silently* But let me say that if you continue this, I will be there!
Well gee, there goes me being productive if you keep updating this. You have me hook line and sinker, rosina! It's just ... gaaahh I can't wait for the next chapter. Snape's perspective is great - and even though he's a little different it feels natural. That, and you have Harry pegged perfectly. I did love the commentary on Harry and his friends by Minerva and Snape, and the dialogue between Harry and Snape was just superb (especially Snape's advice). I am glad you had a good reason for Harry's refusal, as at first I was like, how do you refuse Harry Freaking Potter? Anyway, I hope your next update comes quickly, but as long as it's this good I am willing to wait! Ten out of ten for you, and seeing as I'm rather picky (I admit it, I'm a critic and hard to please ... sigh), that's saying something!
Author's Response: Thanks - I really appreciate your comments. I doubt there will be any more, as unlike proper storytellers *bows to Whitetail* I can't seem to get my head around anything more than a one shot. I live in hope though!
This was most excellent! Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
"...robes flailing in his wake..." -- love it! Wonderful departure from the typical billowing! // I really enjoyed the helpful, upbeat mentor, even if he was under orders (& wishing he'd remained Headmaster!). He covered a tremendous amount of information for Harry to consider & gave excellent advice throughout their encounter-- poor Gryffindor's head must be spinning in shock at the Slytherin's change in attitude! Wow! But seriously, this turned out a great read, jam-packed for its length, despite it focusing on dialogue as opposed to spark-filled action between the two main characters! Way to go! (And if you ever had the urge to expand on the story, this would be a great first chapter!) :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words - glad it turned out ok. I saw your e mail. Sorry! But I'm quite sure you've made better use of 'it' than I have and I'm really looking forward to reading your story....eventually!
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