Oh my, how lovely! Wow, the scenes were drawn out so beautifully and delicately. I felt like I was there, and somehow you managed to capture perfectly the melancholy feel of the season for both Harry and Severus. I loved the image of little Severus in his ratty clothing at the back of the church, and Lily's description was simply wonderful. Harry was perfect too. This is definitely my favourite Christmas story so far this year, and I've only read the first chapter! Excellent ... now onward!
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I loved this chapter too, and at first I thought about ending it with the first chapter and just do it as a oneshot, but then I figured I wanted to know what happened next, so I write the other chapters as well.
| Title: Silent Night
| 14 Jan 2014 12:54 am
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| Reviewer: C (Anonymous)
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Lovely story and a pleasure to read
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
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