Yay! Go Harry! I hope Snape will begin looking for the qualities that Lily had. It should be interesting when it all hits the fan about Harry's true parentage. Great work on this chapter! I was so enthralled, I hadn't noticed it was over until the end. Wish there was more already! :3
Really looking forward to reading more, please update again soon!
Yep just what I thought Snape is an evil git. At least Harry hasn't given up on him yet and surprisingly Ron is ok with Snape being Harry's dad and is trying to help.
It was brave and kinda cool in a shocking way how Harry stood up to Snape in the end which cause Snape to think about Harry being Lily's and not James. Once he finally figures it all out I can see Harry going so I am just like my "father" huh and then walk away or something like that.
Harry should show Snape his mothers letter.
| Title: Part II
| 27 Jan 2014 1:08 am
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| Reviewer: moonstruck (Anonymous)
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I liked Harrys first potions class. It was very realistic that he was neither clueless like Snape likes to see him nor some kind of brilliant genius that could have answered every question. I think you found the happy medium.
I liked the way the remembrall incident played out. Of course Hermione would know the incantation to retrieve it though I was surprised that Harry managed to keep his feet on the ground.Poor Harry. It does seem like he is making some headway with Snape though.
| Title: Part I
| 25 Jan 2014 9:42 pm
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| Reviewer: moonstruck (Anonymous)
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This really is a promising start. Poor Harry! I can already see where this is going. Hopefully it all ends well...
I especially liked your other fic so I'm very much looking forward to this one.
| Title: Part I
| 23 Jan 2014 12:28 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good start to the story, a familiar theme but I think this will have a different twist thank you
I don't think I've ever seen a story where Harry finds out that Snape is his father before he starts Hogwarts. It will be interesting to see how he tries to impress Severus. I imagine he has his potions book memorized. One comment - it should be 'my curiosity was piqued.'
Author's Response: Oops! Right you are. Well, Harry's no Hermione Granger...
| Title: Part I
| 18 Jan 2014 11:17 am
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| Reviewer: Adam (Anonymous)
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Cute story, looking forward to reading the rest. I prefer the stories where Harry finds out Snape is his father when he is young, and not in his teens.
Just thought you should know something weird seems to have happened with the first sentence, like a part is missing or something.
It came at midnight, but Harry hadn't had time to read it until nd to be of the same stiff material that his Hogwarts letter had been made of.
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know! I've already had to fix a few errors in posting but I think I've fixed it this time. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Interesting story so far. I see you used a bit from the first book, I'm interested in seeing how this story further develops. I hope Snape isn't going to be as mean to Harry as he was in cannon but either way, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! The story is going to develop within the scope of canon. I hope that'll be okay. Well, Snape did hate Harry's 'father' after all...
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