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Title: The Greater Good 04 Mar 2022 12:19 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Powerful end to the chapter.
Title: The Greater Good 07 Sep 2015 5:24 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, poor Severus and Harry both. Finding out that you must room with your most hated student or teacher, respectively, can't be all that good for an already fragile mental state. It'll be good for them, though - this way they'll be forced to actually see one another instead of what they have come to expect.

    Author's Response: Definitely agree with you there on the shock value that would have on a fragile mental state! I'm pretty sure it would do me in if that happened to me ... :S Thankfully Harry is a strong one, and yes, there is a lot of opportunity there. :) Thanks for the review, Dream!
Title: The Greater Good 18 Apr 2014 9:43 pm
Reviewer: Ghgvvihvufyv (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice a cliffhanger would be good but in the end harry should get out and snape gets a broken leg

    Author's Response: You mean, a cliffhanger at the end of the story, which is to say the prologue I have provided? That isn't the end. That's just a hint at where things will go. Snape breaking his leg? An oddly specific suggestion. The ending is already worked out, so I'm not thinking that's part of the plan. Thanks for the review!
Title: The Greater Good 27 Mar 2014 2:01 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter thank you so much

    Author's Response: You're welcome! Thanks for reviewing.
Title: The Greater Good 24 Mar 2014 8:09 pm
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    I think I'm becoming addicted to your story and I need a new chapter shot already XD

    Author's Response: Haha, thanks crotia!
Title: The Greater Good 24 Mar 2014 2:50 pm
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great as always. Can't wait for more angst from Harry.

    Author's Response: And plenty of angst will come! Thanks for the review. ;)
Title: The Greater Good 24 Mar 2014 1:20 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm, Severus is certainly angry enough for two. Hopefully his outburst has given Dumbledore plenty to think about. Harry seems overly quiet and well behaved; can't believe that will last.

    Author's Response: Yes, no doubt Dumbledore will be thinking hard after that encounter. Haha, yeah, Harry definitely seems a little calm doesn't he? Thanks for reviewing!
Title: The Greater Good 24 Mar 2014 3:30 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic! Poor Severus, what a terrible thing developed for him. good job with the show down with him expressing himself to Dumbledore. Poor Headmaster, that must have hurt deeply. I wonder when Snape will find out the real reason why Harry is at Oak Tree. Poor Remus too, this is probably the last thing he'd want for Harry. Harry seems to be doing well though so far. He seems almost healthy. I wonder when he will start showing what's wrong with him at Oak Tree. Thank you so much for the update! I'm loving the story.

    Author's Response: Howdy! Great to hear you enjoyed the "showdown" with Dumbledore and Snape. I figured Snape would be pretty volatile - I almost feel kind of bad for inflicting that comment on Dumbledore! Yeah, I figured that the new situation would shock Harry out of his funk for a little while. Make him seem okay, and once routine was established ... things would bleed through again. Only a matter of time ... unfortunately. His sort of issue is a bit strange in the fact that it's easy to look alright a lot of the time, but it's those times when life gets overwhelming that really make the person break down (from what I've seen). Anyway, thanks so much for the review! I'm stoked that you are enjoying this story as much as you are. Cheers, and thanks for the detailed review!
Title: The Greater Good 23 Mar 2014 11:32 pm
Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Infamous words, "For the greater good."
    It was very considerate of Dumbledore to have cast a silencing charm so no one (Harry) could hear what he and Severus talked about.
    But given the way Albus has always treated Severus when they're NOT alone, it was unexpected. Albus usually wants people to overhear and think that Severus is being unreasonable and demanding.
    So I wonder if perhaps the visiting rooms are pre-charmed instead, or if the staff charm them ahead of allowing visitors into them.

    Author's Response: Hmm, well, you could make a case for either situation, really. The way I see it though, is that the hospital charms the visiting rooms, so that people are ensured privacy. There are of course security measures involved in that, meaning if something is getting violent/dangerous, the spells applied to the room would alert staff. But keep in mind, if it was Dumbledore, he probably would have done it because Snape knows a lot of Order secrets - although not all due to his previous position as a spy - and therefore could have divulged some in his distressed state. Bad for Harry to hear, as well as any other patients/staff in the ward to hear. Thanks for the review.
Title: The Greater Good 23 Mar 2014 11:28 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Looking forward to more

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.

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