I really enjoyed the ground quidditch, and Harry meeting others his age.
I think Snape's reaction is pretty realistic, he would be feeling pretty vulnerable right now and the only way for him to deal with it is it lash out, his pride has had a massive blow. Poor Harry though! Glad his first day has had some light with the game and meeting Steven will be a bit of an eye opener for him. cant wait for the next install!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reviewing! I am glad you feel Snape's reaction was realistic. Great to hear you're looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for the feedback!
| Title: Snape's Threat
| 04 Apr 2014 12:03 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Ground quidditch sounds good and a really uplifting part. Loved the Severus Harry interaction thank you
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Fmh!
It's not surprising that Snape would make up a cover story. I can't imagine he would ever want anyone, especially a student to know where he is. At least Harry had a bit of fun with the Ground Quidditch, although he seems a little too cooperative at present.
Author's Response: Yeah, Harry is a little cooperative. Of course, he's still going through the shock of assimilating. That's shocked him out of his state briefly. It will return, with all the anger. And yes, I thought Snape's story would be a likely think for him to tell Harry. Thanks for the review!
| Title: Snape's Threat
| 01 Apr 2014 1:15 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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I loved how Snape insisted he was there only for protection - so realistic!
Author's Response: Thanks BlueWater5! Yes, I thought he needed to pull out his defenses a little to be realistic, and telling Harry a lie about why he is there fits. I am glad you are of of the same opinion!
Nice, and I hope there will be some more sevy action soon. what you wrote was amazing already though. And with such an ending I refuse to believe you are annoying enough to let us wait to long because I couldn't bare the truth if you would make us wait. So just don't.
Author's Response: Hmm, yes. I love writing Snape. Hang in there. He'll show up again! The next chapter will be up Sunday, so hopefully that isn't too long ... Cheers!
| Title: Snape's Threat
| 31 Mar 2014 5:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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Thank you for a wonderful story so far, I am looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Howdy, Eszther! Great to hear you are liking it, and you are very welcome for the story! Thanks for reviewing.
Awesome, I love it. Way to go Daisy. I am so glad that Harry has someone he can really get along with and commiserate with our their similar problems. Ground Quidditch sounds awesome. Loved your descriptions of Snape and how he lied to Harry about why he was there. I wonder how long the deception will last. Great chapter and fabulous story. Thanks for the update! Now I want to play Ground Quidditch.
Author's Response: Yes, I felt it necessary to give Harry someone who kind of knew what he was going through. Hmm, how long will the lie stand, indeed? Great to hear your enjoyed that part. Thanks again for the detailed review!
Ground Quidditch was definitely a fun touch!
Author's Response: Great to hear you liked it, cckeimig!
| Title: Snape's Threat
| 31 Mar 2014 1:26 am
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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Yay! Updates make me happy. Once a week is simply not enough! I've been checking every 30 minutes today. This chapter is amazing!
Author's Response: Haha, yeah ... and I was a slowpoke today too! Sorry. :P Great to hear that you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks so much for the review. Wish I had time to update more than once a week too!
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