Hi Whitetail,
Sorry I haven’t written a review in ages - I didn’t lose interest, only I’ve had a really busy couple of weeks. But now I’m gonna reread your story and still looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response: Hey Annora! Oh that's alright - everyone gets busy sometimes! Awesome to hear you're still interested! Thanks for the review!
I'm slightly surprised that the unit doesn't seem to have any magical means of keeping tabs on the patients - it doesn't seem that safe a place to be. So, Snape's little secret didn't stay hidden for long, and now Harry is starting to unravel like his jumper. Lord knows how you're going to get them out of this. We'll find out in due course though, and in the meantime good luck for your exams.
Author's Response: Yes, magical monitoring spells I think would work for some degree, but I'm not sure how specific they could get. I mean, if the Ministry of Magic can't detect exactly which person with a trace did underage magic, I don't think they could get all that detalied in watching over patients. Monitoring where they go on the unit, yes. Monitoring non-magic altercations, I suspect would be difficult. Besides, haha, it would kill all the complications if they could magically find out if someone said something mean/ pushed someone. And, the auror is in the same unit for psychiatric reasons, so of course if he knew Severus, not hard to find out. And yes, Harry is having a tough time, isn't he? Thanks for the luck!
| Title: Paper Cranes
| 08 Apr 2014 12:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very intense! thank you a great chapter and I like Stephen
Author's Response: Thanks Fmh! I'm so glad you like Stephen! I really enjoy writing him, so I'm glad you are pleased with his character. I thought that there were some nice parallels between him being seen as a "freak" for his sexuality and Harry being a freak for his magic.
| Title: Paper Cranes
| 07 Apr 2014 5:12 am
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| Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous)
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I would imagine that if an irate ex-auror can find Severus at this super-secret clinic, Death Eaters aren't far behind.
Author's Response: Well, the Auror is in the psych ward too. He's a patient, so of course if he recognized Severus, he would know where to find him because they live on the same floor. There's a confidentiality agreement as stated earlier that must be signed, so he can't actually say anything to anyone regarding where Severus is. So, Voldemort, so far seems not to know.
Oh wow. Great development!
Author's Response: Thanks, Jan! Glad you enjoyed it.
| Title: Paper Cranes
| 07 Apr 2014 2:01 am
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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This chapter was absolutely amazing!
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words!
wow, awesome. And as promised on sunday with some good Snape action. And really angsty as well.
Author's Response: Howdy, crotia! Great to hear you liked the chapter with all its angsty-ness! Thanks for reviewing.
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