Hippogriffs on the Hogwarts Express! Lovely detail about how the train is used when the students AREN'T on it! And now, at the end, Harry and Snape walk through the door together. Always before, Harry has been on his own having to face the entire school without an adult in his corner. But now, not only does he have an adult to walk in with him, it's an adult who knows EXACTLY what he's feeling, rather than merely paying lip service to Harry's emotions, saying,"I know how you feel", when obviously , the average adult could NEVER know how Harry feels. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for both of them.
Author's Response: Hey Shadow! Glad you liked the train details. I always did wonder what they did with it for the rest of the year. And I'm glad you enjoyed Harry and Severus walking in together. You're very right - it is so different from how Harry has usually had to deal with things! Thanks a lot for your thoughts! Cheers, Whitetail.
| Title: Return to Hogwarts
| 05 May 2015 8:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, Fmh! Hardly anyone reviews the first chapter if you post two at a time :/ So, Cheers! :)
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