Powerful end to the chapter.
I loved the chapter end, though I wonder why no one noticed that they were putting a teacher and a student from the same school together. I’m looking forward to seeing how psychiatry in the magical world works.
This is dark, emotional, and compelling.
| Title: September: The Beginning of an Ending
| 03 Mar 2022 1:32 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I just re-read Prisoners (which I absolutely adore), and am excited to see from your author notes that it is a love child of this story. So I’m intrigued and looking forward to starting the ride.
| Title: September: A Beginning's End
| 02 Aug 2019 8:13 am
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| Reviewer: Phoenix (Signed)
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Wow. Just wow. This story was just beautiful. I've never been touched this much by a story.
Thank you so much.
Author's Response: You are most welcome, HermioneGirl! I am so glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for sharing your thoughts. It is always so nice to drop back into the site and see someone has left a comment. Cheers, Whitetail.
*wipes tears* this was beautiful from start to finish, such a wonderful and emotional ride! I loved both the story you wrote and the way you wrote it, I adore your writing style and I hope that your work on your original novel is going well! Thank you so much for taking the time out of your busy schedule and your other projects, even if it was hard for you to keep with it. As someone who knows a lot of people who have seen/are seeing therapists, have been to a psychiatric hospital or are struggling all on their own and as someone who has their own issues that i'm slowly working out with a therapist, this fic resonated a lot with me in a good way. It was all the things i love about severitus, touching and a bit dark, sad but hopeful, with spots of laughter and a lot of love weaved in throughout, and I'll definitely be back to reread it. A lot of the lines in it inspired me, and I feel better about myself after reading it (sorry for the mushy review, it's all your fault, you made me emotional ^^). So thank you, and good job!!
Author's Response: Oh wow, Kiromenanz, thank you for this review. Your words touched *my* heart. I'm so pleased you found this story enjoyable, as I needed it to be realistic for those who have seen mental health difficulties first hand either in their own lives or in those of friends. I'm so glad you have found it inspiring. It was so terribly difficult for me to write! And yes, my novel is still going albeit very slowly. It's been a difficult year so I'm not at the point I wanted to be. Your words are encouraging! So thank you!!
this chapter is the most amazing thing omg i'm cackling xD even as i type this i'm bursting out into random bouts of laughter, Snape's behaviour is just the best thing xD This part totally killed me:
"That was the worst example of guardianship I have ever seen," Dumbledore said sharply, picking up his newspaper.
"Well, Petunia's always been -" began Snape.
To Harry's amazement, Dumbledore hit Snape over the back of the head with the paper. "By you, you overgrown teenager."
Snape spluttered.
"Boots on the table, really?" Dumbledore continued, exasperated. "You had best grow up before next summer. Harry needs a proper example."
it's absolutely beautiful xD
this is so beautiful, this chapter is the third time you made me cry with this story. it's amazing, and thank you so much for writing it
| Title: September: A Beginning's End
| 05 Jul 2016 12:17 am
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| Reviewer: etherian (Signed)
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*applauding* This was a wonderful story. AU, of course, but beautifully so. You treated Harry and Severus wonderfully. In character, yet out but as the story required.
I also really loved Daisy and Stephen. They were perfect!
Author's Response: Thank you etherian! I am so stoked you liked the original characters. They are so hard to get people to like so I am glad you mentioned them. Cheers, Whitetail
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