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Title: Visitors 03 Nov 2014 8:12 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Definitely enjoyed. :-)

    Author's Response: Great to hear!
Title: Visitors 03 Nov 2014 1:49 pm
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great update! Well-written scenes.

    Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. :)
Title: Visitors 03 Nov 2014 8:42 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohh, Ron about made me cry with his, 'He wondered how Harry got by, with nobody to tell him that.' *Sniffles*

    It's nice to see a Ron that cares about his best mate, and isn't completely oblivious.
    Harry under the table was cute, and so was Snape's reaction. Lovely chapter m'dear! Don't let school get you down!

    Author's Response: Hey Scorpia! Great to hear from you. Thanks a lot for the well wishes regarding school - your comment cheered me up immensely! I am glad that you enjoyed Ron's involvement, as well as the table scene. I rather liked that one myself. Cheers, Whitetail.
Title: Daggers 03 Nov 2014 8:27 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    That's SO sweet that Harry wanted to share a room, sweet but completely understandable!

    Every time I see an update from you I do a little dance, ^_^ It's just SO GOOD, and you care about making the characters so real and true to the way JKR wrote them, it's awesome.

    Loving that Harry opened up a little, even though it was difficult for him to do so, and the fact that Snape certainly gained some trust by being patient and listening to him instead of snarking--I'm proud of him. *Grin*

    Wonderful chapter, as usual, :D
Title: Visitors 03 Nov 2014 8:25 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I enjoyed Ron's visit, how it isn't overly emotional, and how Dumbledore accepts what Snape told him. It feels like things are moving ahead.

    I've just happened across this story, and am enjoying it. I am looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.

    Author's Response: Hey darkorangecat! It's awesome to hear you liked Ron's visit. I tried to make it realistic, and considering the guys I know, that's probably how it would go down. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts, and I will most certainly keep trying to deliver good chapters! Cheers!
Title: Calling Out 03 Nov 2014 6:27 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    I like that Harry called Hermione. Very good chapter.
Title: Cracks 03 Nov 2014 1:33 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like the imagery in this chapter. It works so well, and is very poignant.

    In particular, I like this metaphor: "Eternity for what he did. Life in prison - his own Azkaban."
Title: Visitors 02 Nov 2014 4:15 pm
Reviewer: Lili (Signed) [Report This]
    So wonderful

    Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know your thoughts, Lili!
Title: Visitors 02 Nov 2014 11:53 am
Reviewer: hinaths (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow!! I really love your story!! They're really starting to get along... the end of this chapter brought tears to my eyes... Good luck on your school work :)

    Author's Response: Great to hear that you liked the end of the chapter! Thanks so much for the luck with school work, as well as for the review. It's great to hear you are enjoying the story.
Title: Visitors 02 Nov 2014 6:11 am
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved this chapter. MIDTERMS ARE CURRENTLY EATING MY SOUL AS WELL. Your note made me laugh in an understanding appreciation :)

    Author's Response: Glad to hear you enjoyed it! Oh goodness me, sorry you too have been suffering from the Dementor that is midterms, Lyzasnape! I am glad that my comment made you laugh. Good to know somebody else appreciates the difficulty of it! Good luck with yours - I hope you do well!  hanks so much for reviewing. Cheers, Whitetail.

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