| Title: A Little Bit of Trust
| 10 Jul 2014 6:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved it can see a start in their relationship but poor Harry I hope Stephen forgives him
Author's Response: Good to hear! Yes, poor Harry.
| Title: A Little Bit of Trust
| 08 Jul 2014 4:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Quynce (Anonymous)
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I love this story, but I was hoping for a little more interaction between our two main characters. I don't expect that communication between them will be easy, but it's chapter 20 and I was hoping for more dialogue than that bit at the end.
Author's Response: Good to hear you are enjoying it. I can understand your thoughts on that. I know the interaction is coming slow, but there are many reasons for that. I personally think it would take them a long time to really end up being friendly, because there are a lot of distractions at the place they currently reside. They are not forced to interact much, so they won't. It will keep increasing though. Thank you for your input.
Good chapter, as always. Interesting developments all around.
| Title: A Little Bit of Trust
| 05 Jul 2014 7:44 pm
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| Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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I love your plan with Severus' new purpose.
Author's Response: Thanks crotia! I think finding purpose is a very important part of recovering from trials such as Severus', so it is nice to hear that you enjoyed this developement.
Love this chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
| Title: A Little Bit of Trust
| 04 Jul 2014 6:11 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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Great update! Snape's introspection was well-written.
Author's Response: Thanks, BlueWater5! Awesome to hear you felt Snape's portion was well-written. :)
| Title: A Little Bit of Trust
| 04 Jul 2014 5:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Abie (Signed)
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What I really like about this chapter is that it shows that recovery is not always an uphill process. Often, people falter and take a few steps backwards, and they feel like they never made any progress at all. In actuality, progress is being made, no matter how many obstacles impede the process. Thank you for caring to portray the realities of mental illness, and I look forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Howdy, Abie! I am so glad that you enjoye the stuttering quality of the recovery. I so agree. Any progress is so difficult to achieve. Setback after setback, but that is why it is so difficult to change anything about oneself. I am so glad you feel that my portrayal of Harry's and Severus' illnesses is realistic. I have been working very hard to make it as realistic as I possible can. Cheers!
| Title: A Little Bit of Trust
| 04 Jul 2014 5:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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Wow. This was great!
Author's Response: Thanks for the positive review, Lili!
Cannot wait for more
Author's Response: Good to hear!
fab chapter
Author's Response: Thanks!
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