Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Rain 16 Jun 2014 4:48 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Looking forward to more

    Author's Response: Great to hear.
Title: A Cracked Mirror 15 Jun 2014 6:11 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    So the penny has finally dropped for Snape. He's going to have to work hard to get Harry to trust him, but at least it'll give him something to work towards and probably help him at the same time. Harry does seem to be making progress - a big step to admit that things aren't fine to one of his best friends instead of just people in the unit.

    Author's Response: Yes, a big step for Harry indeed! Thanks for the review!
Title: A Cracked Mirror 14 Jun 2014 5:59 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, good thoughts abouty the signs, the training ideas are good

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Title: Daisy's Story 14 Jun 2014 5:46 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well presented thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks fmh!
Title: Waking Up 14 Jun 2014 5:38 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an interesting and thoughtful chapter
Title: A Cracked Mirror 11 Jun 2014 3:45 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    I didn't get the notification for this again :( Great chapter though. Looking forward to more

    Author's Response: Those naughty notifications ... maybe Umbridge intercepted it? I thought they fixed that - oh well, maybe drop a line in the shout box. Good to hear you got here eventually though and that you're enjoying it!
Title: A Cracked Mirror 11 Jun 2014 1:17 am
Reviewer: aj (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, been following religiously , I love it :)

    Author's Response: It is awesome to hear that you have been following TSWWM! Thanks a lot for dropping a line and letting me know you've been enjoying it. :)
Title: Daisy's Story 09 Jun 2014 7:19 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    "You look like you could use a biscuit." In a nutshell! I really liked the interaction between Severus & Daisy, and her story felt so sad. If only we could live our own lives in peace instead of allowing bad people to get under our skin. I dieted for years trying to please OTHER people and never got thin; destroyed my metabolism and ended up WAY worse off than if I'd never dieted at all... I hope Daisy can learn to live for herself instead of letting bullies dictate her life. The fact that they suddenly treated her better when she got too thin just shows how shallow and worthless they are. Life's too short to waste it trying to impress shallow people, whether it has to do with body image, status symbols, or whatever. I'm rooting for Daisy!

    Author's Response: Hey shadow! Awesome to hear from you, and terribly sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you (I think this one got missed somewhere as I was sifting ... hmm). Wow, it sounds like you've been through your fair share of battles too. You make very good points when it comes to Daisy's collegues. It makes me sad that there are so many people out there like them, that act so selfishly. I hope that you have been able to recover from your battles, and that you have, or will find a space where you are happy with who you are. I for one can say that your insight and feedback has helped me improve my writing, and I really do love hearing the little snippets you share such as these! Cheers, Shadow, and hope you're having a good year.
Title: A Cracked Mirror 09 Jun 2014 5:21 am
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    I never want to harangue an author for chapters, but it is hard waiting from week to week for this story. I love the narrative shifts between the two characters. I like adolescent, mischievous Severus and this more adult-but-broken side as well. It's also great to get Harry's more resilient perspective.

    Author's Response: Hello, Quynce! Well, a little bit of haranging for new chapters, as you put it, can be a nice indicator of the enjoyment level readers are getting from a story! I am so glad that you are enjoying the story, as well as the overall style with the narrative shifts. That has been a fun challenge to write. Thanks for your feedback regarding the characterizations as well. Always nice to hear people's impressions! I'll keep those weekly updates coming. Cheers. :)
Title: A Cracked Mirror 09 Jun 2014 4:32 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Impresionante!!

    Me encanta como Severus ha sacado conclusiones, además de que es sumamente triste ver el desglose de Severus por su propio pasado

    es triste que sepa tanto de abuso al haber sido abusado,

    más como lo muestra

    Author's Response: Hola, Kendra. Muchas gracias por la revisión!

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