Title: A Plan for Hogwarts
| 14 Apr 2014 10:41 am
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Awesome! Way to go starting a program for Hogwarts! Such a great idea, and it's something for Snape to work on and contribute to. Very clever. Thank you for the update!
Author's Response: Yeah I'm pretty excited about where a program like that for Hogwarts could take the story. It was a relatively new development. I swear Severus forced the idea on me, haha! Strange when that happens. You are most welcome for the update, and thanks for reviewing, Jan!
Title: A Plan for Hogwarts
| 14 Apr 2014 3:11 am
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Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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Thanks for updating! This story is great. I love how you've characterized Severus.
Author's Response: Hey Lili! Great to hear you're enjoying the story, and like Severus' portrayal. He's my favourite to write. Er, sorry Harry ...Thanks for the review. :)
Title: A Plan for Hogwarts
| 14 Apr 2014 1:29 am
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Reviewer: Abie (Signed)
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Thanks for updating! I'm loving this story; I very much enjoy your writing style, and the plot is really original.
Author's Response: You're welcome, Abie! It's wonderful to hear you like my writing style, and feel the plot is unique. I always try to make things just a little different from what would ordinarily be seen in fanfiction. Thanks for the review!
Title: A Plan for Hogwarts
| 14 Apr 2014 12:23 am
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Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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I love it once again you haven't disappointed me
Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback!
Hi Whitetail, Sorry I haven’t written a review in ages - I didn’t lose interest, only I’ve had a really busy couple of weeks. But now I’m gonna reread your story and still looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response: Hey Annora! Oh that's alright - everyone gets busy sometimes! Awesome to hear you're still interested! Thanks for the review!
I'm slightly surprised that the unit doesn't seem to have any magical means of keeping tabs on the patients - it doesn't seem that safe a place to be. So, Snape's little secret didn't stay hidden for long, and now Harry is starting to unravel like his jumper. Lord knows how you're going to get them out of this. We'll find out in due course though, and in the meantime good luck for your exams.
Author's Response: Yes, magical monitoring spells I think would work for some degree, but I'm not sure how specific they could get. I mean, if the Ministry of Magic can't detect exactly which person with a trace did underage magic, I don't think they could get all that detalied in watching over patients. Monitoring where they go on the unit, yes. Monitoring non-magic altercations, I suspect would be difficult. Besides, haha, it would kill all the complications if they could magically find out if someone said something mean/ pushed someone. And, the auror is in the same unit for psychiatric reasons, so of course if he knew Severus, not hard to find out. And yes, Harry is having a tough time, isn't he? Thanks for the luck!
Title: Paper Cranes
| 08 Apr 2014 12:04 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very intense! thank you a great chapter and I like Stephen
Author's Response: Thanks Fmh! I'm so glad you like Stephen! I really enjoy writing him, so I'm glad you are pleased with his character. I thought that there were some nice parallels between him being seen as a "freak" for his sexuality and Harry being a freak for his magic.
Title: Paper Cranes
| 07 Apr 2014 5:12 am
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Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous)
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I would imagine that if an irate ex-auror can find Severus at this super-secret clinic, Death Eaters aren't far behind.
Author's Response: Well, the Auror is in the psych ward too. He's a patient, so of course if he recognized Severus, he would know where to find him because they live on the same floor. There's a confidentiality agreement as stated earlier that must be signed, so he can't actually say anything to anyone regarding where Severus is. So, Voldemort, so far seems not to know.
Oh wow. Great development!
Author's Response: Thanks, Jan! Glad you enjoyed it.
Title: Paper Cranes
| 07 Apr 2014 2:01 am
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Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous)
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This chapter was absolutely amazing!
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words!
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