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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Silence Kept and Broken 04 Mar 2014 4:41 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't remember if I left a review for this but another tear jerking chapter. Looking forward to more. Update soon

    Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. Great to hear you are looking forward to more!
Title: Silence Kept and Broken 04 Mar 2014 2:07 am
Reviewer: rusulka7 (Signed) [Report This]
    Enjoying this very much, I took a while before I started as your warning of dark themes made me hesitate (purely because I wasnt in the right mood for that) but Im very glad I read anyway. I enjoy your style and yes dark moments but realisticaly handled I think, I fellfor them both and am looking forward to their recovery! So glad someone has finally noticed Harry's need!

    Author's Response: Howdy, rusulka7! I am so glad you did give this a try. I knew that the dark theme warnings would scare a few people away, but I didn't want to just put no warnings because it is a very dark story in places, especially considering a lot of the lighter content on this site. It is wonderful to know that you were hooked anyway, and that you feel the portrayal of the dark moments is handled realistically. Yes, it will be nice to see Harry and Snape improve! Thanks for the review!
Title: Silence Kept and Broken 03 Mar 2014 11:20 pm
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant as usual. Can't wait for more

    Author's Response: Hi Lili! Thanks so much for the kind words!
Title: Silence Kept and Broken 03 Mar 2014 10:46 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woot! Awesome chapter! I love how you wrote Hagrid! Such a tender chapter. Poor Snape, poor Harry. I hope they are helped somehow. What a mess they are. Thanks so much for the update!!

    Author's Response: Hey, great to hear you're liking it so much! Also nice to hear you enjoyed Hagrid's scenes. Those were a bit difficult to write. Yeah, those two are a mess. Well, who knows what can happen with time though?
Title: Silence Kept and Broken 02 Mar 2014 10:18 pm
Reviewer: Ajs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    you do not disappoint! Its was really good again!, poor Harry though, its was nice to hear about hagrid etc :)

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! It is nice to know you are enjoying it, and liked the scenes with Hagrid. Your words certainly brightened my day!
Title: Silence Kept and Broken 02 Mar 2014 10:17 pm
Reviewer: Alexander (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting!

    Author's Response: Good to hear you're intrigued. Thanks for the feedback.
Title: Of Unexpected Visitors 01 Mar 2014 2:31 am
Reviewer: Lillian (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Can't wait for more :D

    Author's Response: Great to hear! Another chapter will be up Sunday. Thanks so much for the review!
Title: Of Unexpected Visitors 26 Feb 2014 12:12 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes rather depressing but very good writing thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback!
Title: Of Unexpected Visitors 25 Feb 2014 1:33 am
Reviewer: Annora (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi Whitetail!
    Thanks for the great chapter -- it’s dangerously captivating, and literally awesome. And I mean every word. :)
    I might be completely wrong with this, but I sensed a bit of a 19th century literary style in Snape’s inner thoughts, especially in the first few lines. Anyway, he must be pretty ahead on his descent into madness, because I’m sure a mentally healthy Severus would be ashamed of (and angry with) himself for breaking down like that, for appearing weak in front of another person, whoever be the witness. As for Harry, he seems more okay-ish, but then again, physical self harm might just be a different route to the same pit…
    I can’t wait for the update!

    Author's Response: Howdy Annora! Awesome to hear your thoughts! You are most welcome for the chapter, and thank you so much for the long, detailed review. Hmm, 19th century literary style - yeah, I can see that! Haha, it's funny how sometimes books I am reading influence my writing! I've read a lot of old poetry and such (and write lots of poetry myself) so it isn't all that surprising it bleeds through. Ah yes, and Harry. Next to Snape he does look okay, doesn't he? Harry suffers from one of those issues that makes a person look mostly okay and feel okay a lot of the time, but the trouble is that it's those few times where the anger gets dangerous and the urge to feel pain gets too strong that really makes things difficult. Easy to pretend everything is all right, but really, it isn't. So yes, he does seem okay-ish - and that's what Harry is strugging with too, admitting he has a problem! Thanks again for your thoughts, and I can't wait to update too! Next week, alas.
Title: Of Unexpected Visitors 24 Feb 2014 3:43 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wooooooow. Amazing. I love it, all the emotions and intimacy of what's going on. I am so, soo glad that Remus decided to stop by any way. I wonder if he is planning something - Harry likely wouldn't catch it in the state he's in. I loved how you wrote out the part with Severus and what Albus said. Wow, fantastic job!

    Author's Response: Hey Jan! Great to hear that you thought it was amazing! Hmm, is Remus planning something - that is the question, is it not? Good deduction! I am so pleased you enjoyed the part with Severus and Albus. Originally I only had this story from Harry's POV and had him find out why Snape was there about half-way through, but I really wanted to write Snape's struggles out. So I'm glad you enjoyed that scene. I really loved writing it. Thanks for reviewing, Jan! Cheers!

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