Wow! What an amazingly creepy and heart-breaking beginning. I am so glad I don't need to wait for the next chapter to be published! *reading on...*
Wow! I did NOT expect that! Truly a horror to have used Lily and have her as caretaker. Oh wow. Awful.
But great writing and idea!
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Yes please! Very original thank you
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| 21 Feb 2014 2:00 am
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Lovely start and a truly grim way of giving Voldemort an heir. Yuck.
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| 20 Feb 2014 5:19 am
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Definitely worth continuing....awesome start!
That was awesome! And dark! And Evil! And great! When the next chapter?
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| 19 Feb 2014 9:19 pm
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Yes, it's worth continuing! Definitely.
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| 19 Feb 2014 7:23 pm
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Worth continuing...OF COURSE IT IS!!!!! Are you insane, why would it not be, this is one of the more original plots I've seen in a long time. CONTINUE DAMN IT!!! Although it needs a beta to go through and correct grammar errors and iron it out, but other than that, it's a brilliant idea.
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Definitely continue! There is certainly a horror aspect, as you mentioned, which could squick some, but I think the story overall is fascinating and gripping. Can't wait to see what happens next!!
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