| Title: Thinking it Through
| 13 Mar 2014 9:28 pm
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| Reviewer: YnxNyx (Signed)
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i have to admit i'm amazed. the twist is kinda sick - pregnant inferi and all - but you've managed to work up a believable way to connect Severus and Sirius and loose alot of the animosity that was between them.
i like what you've done with the parseltongue, changing the naming rules and such. it makes more sense since it was just the two boys, but then how did they learn to speak it anyway? some snakes from the forest taught them?
Love this story I can't wait for more
I am really interest to see how this family develops.
| Title: Thinking it Through
| 08 Mar 2014 6:01 pm
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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| Title: Thinking it Through
| 05 Mar 2014 9:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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What a lovely, unique plot. Maybe lovely is not the right turn of phrase but your story is very intrigueing. As for names - Harry could be Orion and Riddle jr. could be Jerome, shortened to Jerry as in Tom and Jerry ;)
| Title: Thinking it Through
| 05 Mar 2014 7:03 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Nice cover story! I am so glad that Snape can speak parseltongue. Too bad Harry hasn't been speaking English for the last couple of years. They will have a lot to teach those two boys. I am so glad that Snape and Sirius and putting down their differences!
Why is Harry the four year old? I mean Voldemort attacked the potter family when Harry was 1. Also how come Harry knows so much about Parseltongue stuff? Please answer these questions because i'm confused.
Author's Response: Harry was one year, three months at the time of the attack, it takes around nine months for a baby to grow to term. So Harry would have been about two years older than his brother. As three years have passed, that would make the baby two and Harry four.As for the parseltongue, Harry recieved the ability in the attack and the baby inherited it, so it is a common language
| Title: Thinking it Through
| 05 Mar 2014 4:14 am
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| Reviewer: jgroovydaisy (Anonymous)
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Really enjoying this story! Creative and looking forward to more!
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