Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 1 24 Jun 2023 1:05 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked this first chapter. It paints such an intriguing scene.
Title: Chapter 1 11 Mar 2014 12:31 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Rather jumped into the middle of this I think. Not realistic to w all 20days from Surrey and not get to London yet! Apart from that a good start!
Title: Chapter 1 08 Mar 2014 6:44 am
Reviewer: fireguy88 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I enjoyed the chapter, however a couple of points that I thought I would point out.

    The situation that they were in was difficult to follow at first. Lots of dialogue and not very much description of their situation. It was not bad! I enjoyed it!

    Author's Response: Hey thank you fireguy88,

    I much appreciate your comment, and I'll look over the chapter and try to clear it up a little.
    I hope that this won't stop you from continuing on with the story.

    The following chapters however shed a little more light on the situation, thank you :)

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