Very daring to ride the train car. Thanks for the fun chapter.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 11 Mar 2014 12:37 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Good description but please use capital letters for proper nouns and the possessive pronoun as in God's house
Author's Response: Hey Fmh,
I'll pay more attention to that, thank you.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 08 Mar 2014 6:08 am
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| Reviewer: bill-dog (Anonymous)
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I enjoy the blend of adventure and friendship that occurs between Pierce and Harry and can hardly ever wait to hear more! I look forward to hopefully seeing the growth that both of them make as their journey continues. I think it's a story that can offer a bit of hope to those in difficult situations! My only request is to to see more! I will try to think of things I want to see happen, but as of now, I like where the story is going!
Author's Response: Thank you for your quick review Bill-dog :)
I am really looking forward to their journey as well, it's exciting to write it :D
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