Oh dear, I wonder what is going on with Pierce. Thanks for the emotional chapter.
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| 13 Mar 2014 12:12 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an interesting chapter
| Title: Chapter 7
| 12 Mar 2014 7:06 am
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| Reviewer: Bill-Dog (Anonymous)
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Thanks for the chapter Whitsnitch91! I appreciate the dynamic between Snape, Pierce, and Harry. Pierce adds a great element to the story. You are developing his character well. I am interested in seeing how Pierce and Harry work out their lives with Snape since they are both dealing with it so differently. I also like to see Snape healing, in a way, through this second chance he has with Harry and himself. This scene is difficult because there are so many different ways to discipline kids so it must have been hard to write, but i like how it demonstrates the differences between the characters.
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