This was a nice chapter. I do wish that Snape would be gentler though.
| Title: Chapter 8
| 16 Mar 2014 2:13 am
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| Reviewer: Bill-Dog (Anonymous)
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I like reading about this new style of teaching Snape has taken on. I also look forward to the turns the story takes with Terrance a part of the picture now! I enjoy seeing Snape work with Terrance so he can go on to university. This story so far is a beautiful picture of humanity LOVE IT WHITSNITCH91!!!
Interesting idea with Pierce being in the picture, it's new and make it all more interesting.
Sev seems to be really good with children in long way, which is kinda surprise... though he would struggle more.
I am interested in how you are determinating Harry character, he is shuffling from broken silent type to this "Hey, stop it" attitude.
All in all I really enjoy it, you're doing good piece of work here, keep it up!
man harry you sure were lucky snape didn't smack your behind for playing with spells like that. this was a really great chapter. i can't wait for the next chapter. thank you so much for writing this story. its really appreciated. :)
man harry you sure were lucky snape didn't smack your behind for playing with spells like that. this was a really great chapter. i can't wait for the next chapter. thank you so much for writing this story. its really appreciated. :)
| Title: Chapter 8
| 13 Mar 2014 12:35 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
| Title: Chapter 8
| 11 Mar 2014 11:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Lea (Anonymous)
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I like your story very much - it's interesting plot and definitely it has potential. relations between both boys and Severus and them are very well described :)
And definitely I would like to know more about Severus's time travel.
If may have a little advice, please try to check spelling, and mostly - if changing the topic / situation (e.g. Severus in his quarters after Harry's plays with spells) try to mark it somehow (like *~*~*~*~*~between different situations. It will be easier to read.
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