| Title: Chapter 3
| 08 Mar 2014 8:24 am
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| Reviewer: Krishna (Anonymous)
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Please continue!
Where's CP though?
| Title: Chapter 1
| 08 Mar 2014 6:44 am
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| Reviewer: fireguy88 (Anonymous)
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I enjoyed the chapter, however a couple of points that I thought I would point out.
The situation that they were in was difficult to follow at first. Lots of dialogue and not very much description of their situation. It was not bad! I enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Hey thank you fireguy88,
I much appreciate your comment, and I'll look over the chapter and try to clear it up a little.
I hope that this won't stop you from continuing on with the story.
The following chapters however shed a little more light on the situation, thank you :)
| Title: Chapter 3
| 08 Mar 2014 6:40 am
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| Reviewer: Bill-Dog (Anonymous)
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The story of these boys tugs at my heart. I like how you work in Clearwater. :) I also like seeing the boys get some help from the priest and Mrs. Clearwater. I am curious to know what happens with their search for Snape. I am worried about what will happen when and if they find him. I'm not sure how he will react and that has me wanting another chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you again for your quick review Bill-Dog, this really is what keeps writers going, btw, do you have any stories up?
Writing the Snape Enters scene is proving to be exciting, thrilling and nerve wracking, he is just such an awesome, but complicated young man!
Thanks again :)
| Title: Chapter 2
| 08 Mar 2014 6:08 am
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| Reviewer: bill-dog (Anonymous)
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I enjoy the blend of adventure and friendship that occurs between Pierce and Harry and can hardly ever wait to hear more! I look forward to hopefully seeing the growth that both of them make as their journey continues. I think it's a story that can offer a bit of hope to those in difficult situations! My only request is to to see more! I will try to think of things I want to see happen, but as of now, I like where the story is going!
Author's Response: Thank you for your quick review Bill-dog :)
I am really looking forward to their journey as well, it's exciting to write it :D
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