It's good but you should always check for proper spelling and grammar before posting a story and if you don't have the time, look into getting a beta or have someone proofread it. Overall a lovely story! Have a nice day!
| Title: No Regrets
| 26 Sep 2014 10:40 am
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| Reviewer: snarry fan (Anonymous)
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Woooooooooooooow!!!!!!!! Its greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat
Oh! Its the best
| Title: No Regrets
| 27 May 2014 11:19 pm
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| Reviewer: PainfulLife (Anonymous)
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It was very good. I think you need to go over it again and correct some spelling and some grammar. Other than that very good.
awww that was a very sweet story thanks for writing it :)
| Title: No Regrets
| 08 Mar 2014 7:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Kazetoame (Anonymous)
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So, even after being raised in the wizarding world, he still pulled the same shenagains? I'm not sure I can see that. I don't think he would have been the same Harry as in the books. Other than that, the story was nicely put together and written well.
Author's Response: You know...I have to admit...I had the same thought and toyed with the idea of changing his hogwarts years. But I feared it would take away from the main idea of how Severs feels for harry...I was worried it'd be information overload and we would lose the main idea
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