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Reviews For So Close
I'll keep reading but I have to say that there is so much here that was in Goblet of Fire that I hated that it makes me angry to re-read it here. I do like the fact that Snape is trying to do right by Harry, to defend him even when Harry doesn't realise it. At the very least there is one adult in the know that truly cares about Harry. It is frustrating that his hands are so tied (with how he must appear to his Slytherins) and half the time Harry's own self-righteous anger and demands to know what the adults are saying about him. Your writing is very good but I am really annoyed with all of the characters. I hope this works out.
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