Potions and Snitches
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Reviews For Child of Innocence
Title: Chapter 1 20 Apr 2014 3:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely start to the story thank you
Title: Chapter 21 17 Apr 2014 6:35 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    that power of a parents/guardians presence
Title: Chapter 20 16 Apr 2014 5:03 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Agh and I though Dragons were bad. Good Luck Harry.
Title: Chapter 19 16 Apr 2014 4:51 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Gregor and Dian are bad characters. I bet they will show Draco something of the first task and then when Harry finds out that Draco knew he will lose all trust he had left in Draco. Harry should tell Severus or someone that Draco is turning and not in a good way.
Title: Chapter 18 09 Apr 2014 6:17 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Man if I was Harry I would go to Dumbledore demanding that he go to classes at Hogwarts and then travel back to Dumstrang for the stupid tourney so at least he can get an actual education.
    Draco is totally gone he is going to come back a changed boy.
Title: Chapter 17 07 Apr 2014 2:37 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    I didn't ask this question last time since I just thought of it but why didn't you chose Krum as the champion? Was he the one that put Harry's name in the cup and then was going to make sure he got to the end like Voldemort wants? Oh never mind I bet it was Bennet that did and now he is the one that will make sure that Harry makes in the end. It was all planned out. That wouldn't surprise me. LOL I am really thinking about that a lot.

    Author's Response: I pretty much didn't choose Krum because there's a whole backstory rattling around in my head about Bennet. I suppose it will come out in time. As for who puts Harry's name in the cup....I guess we'll have to wait and see. Both of us ;)
Title: Chapter 16 06 Apr 2014 2:24 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    I still don't trust Aris. I don't trust him as far as I can throw him and with his abilities in defense that's not very far. I probably couldn't get a hand on him.
Title: Chapter 16 05 Apr 2014 9:54 am
Reviewer: Mister (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter, Aris intrigues me a lot.
Title: Chapter 15 03 Apr 2014 10:34 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah he got to talk to both. That should make him feel better at least until tomorrow when his name comes out of the cup when he didn't put it in. I wonder who is putting his name in?
    I have the feeling that I will not like their new friend (sorry can't remember his name just that it starts with an A) that he is playing nice then will turn on him and get Harry in a lot of trouble or majorly hurt.
Title: Chapter 14 01 Apr 2014 11:16 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow I like how you made things different. Like eating and the class set up. Lets hope this doesn't cause Draco to turn dark we don't want that.

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