| Title: Turning Tables
| 20 Mar 2014 1:19 am
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| Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous)
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Oh, this is delightful!
“But he’s at the Ministry!”...
“Dumbledore’s been in his office the entire afternoon, eating sweets and keeping his fingers crossed that we would ‘see past our differences’.”
“Perhaps he too, should have remembered not to meddle in the affairs of wizards.”
This is the best part! Harry and Severus have come to understand each other quite well, and are coming together against Dumbledore!
That was a novel plot. I liked the way Snape turned the interview on Harry and found out what he wanted to know. He isn't a spy for nothing.
I would be so mad at Albus. He needs to keep his nose out of other peoples business. He also should have taken care of Harry a long time ago not have to wait for Sev to figure it out by mistake.
I agree I would love to see more of this story if you can figure out how to make it longer that would be awesome :)
| Title: Turning Tables
| 19 Mar 2014 1:27 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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Oh, very good. I would love to read more.
I love how Snape turned the tables on Harry and saw through all Harry's attempts to hide the truth.
ACK! WHY is this only a one shot!?? This needs to be a long awesome story! I'd love to see the apprenticeship continue. I love the way the conversation went. That suddenly Snape began to piece together the clues that Harry accidentally left. Nicely done. I really hope you continue this and make it a long story. :3
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