| Title: Take me Back to the Start
| 14 Apr 2014 1:29 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a fantastic chapter can't wait to read more!
| Title: Take me Back to the Start
| 12 Apr 2014 10:51 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Woah! I love it! Fantastic transition. I love the fact that Harry and Snape had actually shared the same world, the same vision. It makes sense that Snape was more into it. Fantastically done! And sneaky Dumbledore is my favorite. What does Snape see?
Wow. Just when I think I know what is happening, there is another twist! Who would have thought that Albus would drug Severus? (You apparently, but who else?) Can't wait to see where he ends up. I hope he will keep his dream-feelings towards Harry.
| Title: Take me Back to the Start
| 11 Apr 2014 7:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
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This is really great, heart-wrenching, but great.
| Title: Take me Back to the Start
| 11 Apr 2014 5:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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@kazetoame... The Gangzou was showing what would have been 'but for'one event, not the individual's greatest fantasy. It is not the mirror of Erised. The event that both Harry and Snape most regretted was the death of Lily (and James, in Harry's case). Because it is the same event that changed (and because it was Snape who managed to save them that night), this is the alternate reality that resulted. It is therefore the same for both Harry and Snape.
Author's Response: Gold star for you!
| Title: Take me Back to the Start
| 11 Apr 2014 4:07 pm
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| Reviewer: kazetoame (Anonymous)
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Anou, why would Snape want to be friends with James Potter? I can how that was Harry's fantasy, but not Snape's. He was in love with Lily, why wouldn't he image a life where they were together? I like the story, though it was very sappy. I just can't imagine Severus being friendly with James Potter.
Author's Response: Hey, I am a fan of the sap, not going to lie. Anonymous above me is correct, the Ghangzou only changes one event, they do not create a perfect fantasy (Remember the Dursleys were still there, people fough etc - also, let's be honest, Harry's "perfect" fantasy probably wouldn't have included Snape). The action Snape took to save Lily saved James and Harry as well. As to how James and Snape became friends, Snape is wondering the same thing too, more on that in the next chapters. All I can say is time and shared experience beget understanding, which leads to compassion, which leads to friendship. Anyways, thanks so much for your review! Keep my posted on your thoughts.
| Title: Take me Back to the Start
| 11 Apr 2014 1:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Annora (Signed)
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| Title: Take me Back to the Start
| 11 Apr 2014 1:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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You do not give him a break, do you? At least not yet ... I am looking forward to more of your wonderful story, thank you for posting it!
Author's Response: Haha I suppose it's how you look at what Dumbledore did! Thanks for your review! Please keep me posted on your thoughts!
| Title: Take me Back to the Start
| 11 Apr 2014 10:07 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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| Title: Take me Back to the Start
| 11 Apr 2014 10:01 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I love this story, but this chapter seemed different from the others. I can understand it being difficult to bring the characters back to the real world, but McGonagall seemed out of character and the battle with the Gangzou seemed to simple in the end. Wouldn't Snape have easily defeated the Gangzou the first time around if all it took were a simple "Inducto"? Again, I love this story, but this chapter did seem a bit rushed. I'm sure the next one will be great, though, and I'm looking forward to it!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! Inducto was always the spell. McGonagall was just able to take it by surprise, but perhaps I could have made it a little more challenging for her. As for her character...hmm, maybe..I didn't think she was that emotional. Remember, Harry is only 11 in this story, but I can see what you're saying there too. Anyways, thanks so much for the review! I'll keep what you said mind going forward, and hopefully you like the next chapter better! Let me know : )
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