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Title: You Only Can Heal By Living 20 Apr 2014 3:21 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved this from Severus' point of view it tailors so well with Harry's and yet was different. It is so good that I want it to be the reality and not to have return to the other! Thank you so much.

    Author's Response:

    Hey FMH!

     I think poor Sev is going to feel the same way. I really enjoy crafting the alt. world though. So much fun!

Title: You Only Can Heal By Living 20 Apr 2014 7:45 am
Reviewer: rusulka7 (Signed) [Report This]
    Enjoying this very much! How devastating for Harry and Snape to truly know now what he has been missing. Hopefully Snape will be able to look at harry with clearer eyes now he is re-experiencing it all again! ..just a little thing but its bugging me.. you changed snape's wife from Polly to Pauline? Or did I miss a character? Looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Hey Rusulka!

     I know, the poor guy. I do feel bad that I am torturing him so. 

     Sorry about the Pauline/Polly confusion. Polly is short for Pauline (and Millie is short for Amelia). I should have made that more clear. Keep me updated on your thoughts!

Title: You Only Can Heal By Living 18 Apr 2014 3:20 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter, and I'm curious if Snape will wake up after this. How will he wake up, though? Can Dumbledore give him an anti-venom? How will Dumbledore know when the right time is? Was it a low enough dose that Snape knows something is up? If so, will it come through in how he acts in the dream world, even though that hasn't been the case so far? Or because it was a controlled dose, will it just wear off after a while? I hope he doesn't have to kill himself!! I can't wait to find out what happens! Great story!

    Author's Response: Haha don't worry. Dumbledore is making sure real-life Severus is safe. The distilled potion is a lot more controlled ; ).
Title: You Only Can Heal By Living 17 Apr 2014 2:55 am
Reviewer: Kayenne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, loved the way Severus insisted on going with James to Malfoy Manor. Way to show loyalty and changed feelings to a former foe!

    Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thanks for taking the time to review! Severus going with James was one of my favourite parts.
Title: You Only Can Heal By Living 17 Apr 2014 2:09 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    If my reviews are like crack, so is your story. It has to be one of the most original ideas that I've read in a long time and I will hate to see it end. As for this chapter, I loved the scene where James and Severus got drunk. I sat and laughed when James turned into a stag to Sev's shock. Having James happily say that he was going to be Snape's wingman in finding a mate was a hysterical end to the scene. Severus and a sick Harry bonding was a good moment, too. Sev really is part of the family now and the get-together at the chapter end proved it. Now if he can only use the knowledge when he comes back to his real life...

    Author's Response:

    I always look forward to your reviews! They're so in depth.

    And Yes, Severus really is becoming part of the family. 

Title: You Only Can Heal By Living 17 Apr 2014 1:37 am
Reviewer: corie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hahahahahaha yup that's what he gets for cuddling!

    Author's Response: Haha yeah, poor Sev. Love is pain.
Title: You Only Can Heal By Living 17 Apr 2014 12:58 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, that was great, I was wondering what big breakthrough Severus would have to have, and that last scene cinched it. I loved the scene with sick baby Harry, it was adorable. I think the integration of the death of Tobias offered a powerful motivator for personal growth, and it really helped move the character development forward in a believable way. The scene in Tobias' apartment was very powerful, and the following family gathering tied it all together nicely. Kudos!

    Author's Response:

    Hey Anonymous!

     I'm glad you liked it. I worked a lot on the Tobias scene, so I'm glad it played out in a way you appreciated. 

     

Title: You Only Can Heal By Living 16 Apr 2014 11:15 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    aww This was an awesome chapter. It had a lot of funny moments and aww moments and a couple sad moments but it was a really well written/long chapter and thanks for writing it :)

    Author's Response: Aw I'm glad you had a wide-range of emotions reading this chapter. Every author likes to hear that!
Title: You Only Can Heal By Living 16 Apr 2014 10:10 pm
Reviewer: Yondi (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohhhh this chapter was simply beautiful! You actually made me cry... I simply can't handle all those Sev-feelings :)
    I don't want it to end... ever! Why couldn't it happen that way in the books? But thank god we have fanfiction.
    I cannot wait for the next chapter :) b29;

    Author's Response:

    Oh no Yondi! I don't want to make you cry. Except I am a little evil so maybe I am slightly happy that you cried.

     Thanks for taking the time to write such a nice review, and keep me updated on your thoughts!

Title: You Only Can Heal By Living 16 Apr 2014 9:23 pm
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved this chapter! I really liked that we are beginning to see how Snape and Harry got to where they were in the dream at Christmas! :) I also appreciate how in character everyone is, despite Severus changing for the better.

    Author's Response:

    Hey Lyzasnape

    Thanks. Yeah I definitely wanted it to show the journey of how someone could change. It was fun to develop Lily and James' characters and the kids too. 

    Keep me updated on your thoughts, I definitely appreciate your reviews. 


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