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Title: Movin' On 27 Apr 2014 8:06 pm
Reviewer: Courtney (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant as always! I anxiously await the next installment.

    Your story has quickly become one of my all time favorites - unique and wonderful idea that is heartbreaking but beautifully done

    Author's Response:

    What kind words, thank you so much!

    I hope you enjoy the rest. Let me know what you think : )

Title: Movin' On 27 Apr 2014 12:08 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic chapter although my mind boggled over the shower scene and then laughed at Harry's an James' interruptions! Great writing you brought the scenes to life!

    Author's Response:

    Haha yeah, I read the shower scene after I posted it an was like 'oh woah I really went for it there' haha.

     I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for all of your reviews. 

Title: Movin' On 25 Apr 2014 7:03 pm
Reviewer: JLP (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was so good! I hope things get better between Harry and Severus in the current timeline too and that he goes and finds Polly.

    Author's Response: Me too!
Title: Movin' On 25 Apr 2014 12:57 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aww that was a fun chapter. Loved Harry-the -wing-man. How adorable!

    Author's Response: Haha it was fun to write! A little lighter than some previous ones. I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Movin' On 25 Apr 2014 8:31 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwww, yay! I love, love, loved it! Thank you for writing such a long chapter! The parting of Snape and the Potters seemed so natural, and I loved seeing how Severus got to go out with Polly. I loved the seeing all the children, the emotions, growing up on a way. Fantastic story. I am sure that this will definitely make Snape see the real Harry in a different light. Oh wow. Will Snape live all the way up to when Harry died?

    Author's Response:

    This is the problem with answering reviews late...the questions are answered!!!!!

     I didn't want to re-write all the Christmas stuff because that would be boring (both to read and write). I thought Harry going to Hogwarts was a good place to stop it because that's where real Snape and real Harry actually me. Harry's vision and Snapes first vision starts four months later (though you know that - duh! haha)

     Its fun to write children growing and changing so I'm glad you enjoyed that! 

Title: Movin' On 25 Apr 2014 7:04 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Polly and Sev are going to get it on :P

    Author's Response:

    Hahaha bow-chicca-wow-wow

     

     

Title: Movin' On 25 Apr 2014 6:05 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm so glad that I visited P&S tonight and stumbled across this story. I just LOVE it! How I wish that the dream could be a real life for Severus... but maybe this dream will eventually have a bit of reality if Severus learns from it and comes to love Harry in the real world. :-)

    I look forward to the next update, and I will be recommending this story to my friends. Well done!

    Author's Response:

    Hey Rhyselle!

     I'm so glad you love it. I love finding new fanfic that I connect with so I'm so happy I wrote a story you are excited about. 

    I wish this could be reality too, it kind of makes every sweet moment bitter-sweet, but I do think it will be a good learning experience.

    Thank you for recommending my story to your friends! That's really cool of you. I hope you enjoy the next chapters! I'd love to hear what you think

Title: Movin' On 25 Apr 2014 5:53 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Another good chapter. The changes in Severus' life have been so interesting to read. He seems like such a different person. With the book behind him, he is the perfect choice for the DADA position. So moving out and taking a job at Hogwarts seems like the natural turn of events for him. Speaking of the book scene, I loved James' comment that Sev was like a pet gerbil.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I believe compassion and friendship can change a lot about a person, which was the launching pad for this story really. He was also still quite young (21) when he first came to stay with the Potters, so I think that his character was a bit more malleable than if everything had happened years later. Also in a lot of this story he doesnt have the whole Voldemort problem hanging over his head, which I think weighs quite heavily on him in the real world.

     Anyways, sorry for this rambling response. I'm glad you felt that the parting was natural, I wanted him to spread his little wings a bit haha. I'm glad you liked the gerbil comment too. Poor James hates talking about money haha.

Title: Movin' On 25 Apr 2014 3:15 am
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story and appreciate that each chapter is well thought out and well written :) Keep them coming! (Please haha)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Lyzasnape! I always look forward to your reviews. I am so glad you like it. Next chapter should be up soon!


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