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Reviews For Visions of Sugarplums Danced in Their Heads
Author's Response: Haha glad you liked it!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the wedding. The fight was hard to write, but you're write, people have ups and downs and both James and Lily are very passionate people.
Thanks again for the review!
Author's Response: Don't worry! It was very strong!
Lily talk about Michael. "This way you won’t have to move Michael until he’s bigger" "I can be here for Polly and Michael when you go back to work" Then later in the chapter, they talk about names and Severus says he will name the baby Michael. The Potters didn't know that earlier, so they could not have called him by name. Author's Response: Good catch!!!!! Whoops. I fixed it. Thanks for letting me know and taking the time to review.
Author's Response: Haha yes, babies are definitely cuter when they don't cry! Thanks for your review, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Let me know!
Author's Response: Thanks Meg!! Hope you enjoy the rest |
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