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Title: Lean on Me 31 Dec 2020 12:22 am
Reviewer: Ducky1776 (Signed) [Report This]
    Sniff. And we lost Bill Withers this year.
Title: Lean on Me 02 May 2014 6:58 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww

    Author's Response: Haha glad you liked it!
Title: Lean on Me 02 May 2014 5:13 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    The wedding was perfect. I especially enjoyed the comments by Polly and Lily after the toasts. The fight between Lily and James was a good mood switch. No matter how happy a couple is, there are bound to be some bumps along the way. After all the help Sev has gotten from James, it was nice that he was able to help get Lily and James together again. All that and new babies, too.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you like the wedding. The fight was hard to write, but you're write, people have ups and downs and both James and Lily are very passionate people. 

     

    Thanks again for the review!

Title: Lean on Me 02 May 2014 2:42 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh. Michael James Snape. Wasn't expecting Snape to miss the birth, but wow, powerful chapter. I wonder if/when Snape will catch on to the situation with Rob Bates.
Title: Lean on Me 02 May 2014 1:09 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely but I hope the disinfectant spell was good! Wonderful chapter thank you

    Author's Response: Don't worry! It was very strong!
Title: Lean on Me 01 May 2014 7:12 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! One small mistake though. When James, Lily, and Sev talk about Sev moving in, both James and
    Lily talk about Michael.

    "This way you won’t have to move Michael until he’s bigger"
    "I can be here for Polly and Michael when you go back to work"

    Then later in the chapter, they talk about names and Severus says he will name the baby Michael. The Potters didn't know that earlier, so they could not have called him by name.

    Author's Response: Good catch!!!!! Whoops. I fixed it. Thanks for letting me know and taking the time to review.
Title: Lean on Me 01 May 2014 7:43 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Cute ^.^ I love seeing babies, just so adoriable. At least when they aren't crying. I'm looking forward to reading more.

    Author's Response: Haha yes, babies are definitely cuter when they don't cry! Thanks for your review, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Let me know!
Title: Lean on Me 01 May 2014 7:17 am
Reviewer: Meg (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Im so excited to read all the chapters. :) you've done a great job with this story :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Meg!!

    Hope you enjoy the rest


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