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Reviews For Visions of Sugarplums Danced in Their Heads
It was a really really powerful scene. Severus coming to realise the depth of his dependence and affection and love towards James. The scene with the kids was heartbreaking too. :( I really really love this story. I hope it doesn't have to end. :) Great job!
Author's Response: Haha yes, they are a little trouble prone. I always think of chilli as the ultimate comfort food, which is why I made it James' comfort-food specialty. Thanks for the review, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
James's chili must be REALLY good. He always cooks it :P Poor Jason. I'm glad that Sev was able to help. Lets hope that his dad doesn't find them and the next things we know we are putting Jason and his mom in the ground and his dad is either on the run or in jail for double count of murder. Author's Response: Hey Outlawgal, Thanks for all your reviews throughout this whole story! I always look to see what you have to say, so I just wanted you to know that it was very encouraging. Yeah, poor James, he's a tough nut though, and I always think of chilli as the ultimate comfort food so I had James whip it out whenever comforting was neeed (which was a lot in this story admittedly haha). I hope Jason is ok too. I think it would have been a bit of a wake-up call for his Mom, and although his Dad is an abusive asshole let's say he's not a murderer and they lived happily ever after. Don't worry though, Snape will keep an eye on him.
Author's Response: Hey Bridgeportfox! You always have good questions. It was a group of pureblood terrorists who were responsible and Arthur and Lily were captured and beaten to threaten them into changing policy, but they were ultimately ok. I was going to add that all in but it was getting so long already and I figured that these fictional pureblood terrorists didn't deserve the attention anyways haha. |
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