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Title: Take me Back to the Start 11 Apr 2014 4:07 pm
Reviewer: kazetoame (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Anou, why would Snape want to be friends with James Potter? I can how that was Harry's fantasy, but not Snape's. He was in love with Lily, why wouldn't he image a life where they were together? I like the story, though it was very sappy. I just can't imagine Severus being friendly with James Potter.

    Author's Response:

    Hey,

     

    I am a fan of the sap, not going to lie. Anonymous above me is correct, the Ghangzou only changes one event, they do not create a perfect fantasy (Remember the Dursleys were still there, people fough etc - also, let's be honest, Harry's "perfect" fantasy probably wouldn't have included Snape). The action Snape took to save Lily saved James and Harry as well. 

    As to how James and Snape became friends, Snape is wondering the same thing too, more on that in the next chapters. All I can say is time and shared experience beget understanding, which leads to compassion, which leads to friendship.

     Anyways, thanks so much for your review! Keep my posted on your thoughts. 

Title: Take me Back to the Start 11 Apr 2014 1:52 pm
Reviewer: Annora (Signed) [Report This]
    A brilliant story, reminds me of Supernatural’s episode ’What Is And What Should Never Be’ but in Potterverse it’s a unique plot and your writing sytle is simply amazing!

    Author's Response:

    Hey Annora!

    That was actually part of my inspiration for this story! Good catch. 

Title: Take me Back to the Start 11 Apr 2014 1:02 pm
Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You do not give him a break, do you? At least not yet ... I am looking forward to more of your wonderful story, thank you for posting it!

    Author's Response:

    Haha I suppose it's how you look at what Dumbledore did!

    Thanks for your review! Please keep me posted on your thoughts!

Title: Take me Back to the Start 11 Apr 2014 10:07 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Amazing story and I can't wait to read more of it! I still can't believe Dumbledore sent Snape back to the Dreamworld! Way to go! Looking forward to the next installment!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much!!

    Next installment will be up soon. 

Title: Take me Back to the Start 11 Apr 2014 10:01 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story, but this chapter seemed different from the others. I can understand it being difficult to bring the characters back to the real world, but McGonagall seemed out of character and the battle with the Gangzou seemed to simple in the end. Wouldn't Snape have easily defeated the Gangzou the first time around if all it took were a simple "Inducto"? Again, I love this story, but this chapter did seem a bit rushed. I'm sure the next one will be great, though, and I'm looking forward to it!!!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the feedback!

    Inducto was always the spell. McGonagall was just able to take it by surprise, but perhaps I could have made it a little more challenging for her. As for her character...hmm, maybe..I didn't think she was that emotional. Remember, Harry is only 11 in this story, but I can see what you're saying there too.

     

    Anyways, thanks so much for the review! I'll keep what you said mind going forward, and hopefully you like the next chapter better! Let me know : )

Title: If Only in My Dreams 10 Apr 2014 1:59 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a remarkable story. You have left me in tears with this chapter ending. I look forward to the next chapter.
Title: If Only in My Dreams 09 Apr 2014 11:48 pm
Reviewer: me (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ok, i'll be honest. I haven't read this story yet. I'm afraid there will be a sad ending. Cause after Harry's seen what could have been...and to have all the ripped away is just too cruel. ....I'm no good with angst. and I almost never read it unless there is a happy ending. but it seems like harry will never have 'that' family.

    :(
Title: If Only in My Dreams 09 Apr 2014 11:47 pm
Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! I am thoroughly fascinated by your story, thank you very much!
Title: If Only in My Dreams 09 Apr 2014 5:54 pm
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow!
    I wonder if they are having the same "dream." I hope so.
Title: If Only in My Dreams 09 Apr 2014 1:15 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh. wow. Oh wow oh wow oh wow. So is the Snape in Harry's world the real Snape, or a fake Snape? What is Snape going through? Fantastic story! I love it! The descriptions of the dream are so real!!

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