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Title: The Beginning 07 May 2014 8:24 pm
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    I was really intrigued by the whole premise of the Ghangzou and a way to see what 'might have been'. Nicely ended as well. Hope Sirius truly manage to share Harry with no problems. Might give us a little epilogue?
Title: I'll Never Drown 05 May 2014 4:15 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome. I love how it ended. To be true and strong Polly and Shape's relationship had to be forged in some heavy stuff! This makes everything so believable. Great job on such a difficult chapter.
Title: I'll Be Your Soldier 04 May 2014 11:10 pm
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    Even though I know James probably isn't going to die (I wasn't 100% sure though!) you still had me gripping my bedsheets in terror. :(

    It was a really really powerful scene. Severus coming to realise the depth of his dependence and affection and love towards James. The scene with the kids was heartbreaking too. :(

    I really really love this story. I hope it doesn't have to end. :)

    Great job!
Title: The Beginning 04 May 2014 11:01 pm
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW. So many chapters in one go! WHEEEEE!!!

    I hate how you manage to make me cry with just a few artful words. I hate that you play with my emotions so easily. I hate that you write such awesomeness which drives me absolutely crazy.

    That being said, I love you so much and I would very much like the epilogue.

    Any chance you're throwing in a sequel as well? *pleasepleasepleasePRETTYplease?*

    It kills me that Severus had to go back, after so much love and kindness and stability with James and Lily. And it kills me to see the comparison of the two Harrys. :(

    I need more. *hugs* sequel please?
Title: The Beginning 04 May 2014 6:59 pm
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Epilogo, epilogo, epilogo!!!

    imaginame con una pancarta y un altavoz gritando mientras marcho exigiendo y suplicando un epilogo a esta historia

    porque este capítulo estuvo genial!!!1
Title: The Beginning 04 May 2014 11:47 am
Reviewer: Yondi (Signed) [Report This]
    Please! I need an epilogue with lots of Pauline and Severus in it :)!
    Awesome story. I enjoyed it greatly - thank you so much !
Title: The Beginning 04 May 2014 10:28 am
Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a question! Of course we are interested! Just when you re-introduced Polly. I see a whole lot of possibilities not only for an epilogue but for a whole sequel: Sirius realising he is not yet well enough for taking fully care of an eleven year old, Harry and Severus renovating Spinner's End, Severus and Polly, Sirius and ? ....
    Yours is such an unique plot, it would be sad not to explore it fully. Also your characters are so vividly alive and yet so very plausible.
    Whatever you decide - thank you for what you have written so far!
Title: The Beginning 04 May 2014 10:23 am
Reviewer: HannA (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was one of the best Snape Harry fics I have ever read. An epilogue is just not enough, I need a sequel. I would love to see what happens now, if Pauline and Severus have a new Michael. How The Severus/Harry/ Sirius thing will work out? How Sirius will react to Pauline, will he try to steal her?

    Author's Response:

    Oh no! Sirius would never try to steal Pauline!!!!!!!!! More than anything, Sirius values loyalty and is very loyal himself. I firmly believe he would see that as totally against the guy code. Plus, Pauline likes the quieter guys, I think Sirius would be a little too boisterous for her (though I believe they'd be good friends). 

    I'm trying to transition into doing more original writing, so a sequel is probably not going to happen, but there may be an epilogue. In case there is not, both Sirius and Severus (and Polly and Remus) would have played a huge role in each others life and in Harry's life. It wouldn't have been a conflict between them. 

    Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much. 

Title: The Beginning 04 May 2014 4:38 am
Reviewer: Twonky (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it. (Except for the fact that tears are pouring down my face and my nose is running.)
Title: The Beginning 04 May 2014 1:08 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful although I'm not sure Sirius would have reacted like that! Please, please write an epilogue
    Thank you again for a wonderful and original story

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