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Title: Stay With You 04 May 2014 12:43 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter it shocked me when it changed! I didn't want it to end the dream was so good. Thank you
Title: The Beginning 04 May 2014 12:42 am
Reviewer: Katie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've never reviewed on a story before, and I must have been a lurker on this site for four or more years. Your story took me on an emotional journey, and it hurts that it's over. I think about the characters all the time, and I've grown to love the family dynamic you weaved. Your Severus, in particular, was incredible. I'm glad we got to see what brought him to the point of being "Uncle Sev." The story progressed at a believable pace, your new characters fit flawlessly into the story, and everything seemed so real. The only downside that I see is that it's over, and I would have preferred Harry go with Snape, rather than Sirius. I'll be on the lookout for your future stories- I would also love to see an epilogue. Thank you for the journey.

    Author's Response:

    Wow! Thank you! What a nice review.

    I'm not sure if I'll do an epilogue, so will say this just in case: though Harry did go with Sirius, Sirius and Snape would have played equally large roles in Harry's life, and they would grow to be very good friends.   

Title: The Beginning 03 May 2014 3:54 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You can't end here, not when you called the chapter the beginning! We need to see how real Harry and sev interct! Epilogue, please! Or better yet, sequel!!!!
Title: The Beginning 03 May 2014 3:08 am
Reviewer: alba (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I enjoyed this story very much. It helped me deal with a difficult situation with allowing me to escape into your world for a little while. It was well done and I hope you will consider a sequel to this.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review Alba. Glad to hear that it provided some comfort for you. I hope things are better in the real world for you.
Title: Stay With You 03 May 2014 2:32 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh no. What a painful end to the fantasy world! I love how much Sev came to realize that he had grown. How heart-wrenching for him to lose so much!
Title: I'll Be Your Soldier 03 May 2014 1:37 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a lovely chapter I love the children they are such characters
Title: I'll Be Your Soldier 03 May 2014 12:44 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, they manage to end up in the hospital a lot. Love that James is always making chili. It makes me crave some... Yummmmm

    Author's Response:

    Haha yes, they are a little trouble prone.

    I always think of chilli as the ultimate comfort food, which is why I made it James' comfort-food specialty. Thanks for the review, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

Title: The Beginning 02 May 2014 8:21 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, yes, yes! An Epilogue! I liked this story so much - it was such a different and believable premise. The changes in Severus from a snarky man who had difficulty trusting anyone to the man in the end who had a family and was loved by so many, was so gradual that it all made sense. Your character development was awesome. Even all the children came across as real kids in their own right with their own personalities and not just sketchy extras. The end was bittersweet. Many of the people Severus had loved were gone but there is the promise of a new beginning for him. Great job and thanks for sharing it.
Title: The Beginning 02 May 2014 11:07 am
Reviewer: Mister (Anonymous) [Report This]
    EPILOUGE! Or even better, sequel.

    I need to know what happens next, I NEED to know. This was a really great story and I was sad to see it end.
Title: The Beginning 02 May 2014 10:33 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    I would love to see Severus get together with Polly again. But, I fully enjoyed this story. I would have loved to see what they would have named their little girl.

    Author's Response:

    Hey Outlawgal!

    Thanks for the review! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!

    I actually was going to have them say the name of their daughter over Christmas with Harry (so in chapter 3 or 4), but it was getting long so I cut it. In case I don't do an epilogue, her name was going to be Fiona. 


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