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Title: The Beginning 02 May 2014 10:03 am
Reviewer: Steve_Arkarian (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Stupid security code ate my review...But this time I remembered about copy paste! Anyway, you can't do an epilogue. Ya know why? Because that would mean an ending an this story is way too awesome to just end in an epilogue no matter how long it may be. Instead I will break out my best begging skills and pleading eyes in the hopes of getting you to do a sequel. PLEEEEEEAAAASE!
Title: Stay With You 02 May 2014 9:53 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    So that was Severus's time in the other world. Maybe he can still find Polly in his normal world. Still have Mikey and the daughter.
    Ok back to the top. Wow what a shocker with the whole liver failure again I cried. Glad he made it out ok. I so wish he would have taken out Lucius it would have made my day.

    Author's Response:

    Hey Outlawgal! 

    I am a fan of the happy ending ; ). Yeah, poor Mikey! He was ok though. 

Title: The Beginning 02 May 2014 8:38 am
Reviewer: GatewayGirl (Signed) [Report This]
    And ... it's 1:36 AM. On a weeknight. *sigh* Excellent story! I like how Jason was an easier first step for Severus than Harry.

    (And yes, I'd like an epilogue.)
Title: I'll Be Your Soldier 02 May 2014 8:00 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG I cried so much in this chapter. What a beginning. I knew that James wasn't going to die but still its not like I wasn't thinking it. WOW
    James's chili must be REALLY good. He always cooks it :P
    Poor Jason. I'm glad that Sev was able to help. Lets hope that his dad doesn't find them and the next things we know we are putting Jason and his mom in the ground and his dad is either on the run or in jail for double count of murder.

    Author's Response:

    Hey Outlawgal,

    Thanks for all your reviews throughout this whole story! I always look to see what you have to say, so I just wanted you to know that it was very encouraging.

     Yeah, poor James, he's a tough nut though, and I always think of chilli as the ultimate comfort food so I had James whip it out whenever comforting was neeed (which was a lot in this story admittedly haha). 

    I hope Jason is ok too. I think it would have been a bit of a wake-up call for his Mom, and although his Dad is an abusive asshole let's say he's not a murderer and they lived happily ever after. Don't worry though, Snape will keep an eye on him. 

     

     

     

Title: Lean on Me 02 May 2014 6:58 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww

    Author's Response: Haha glad you liked it!
Title: Stay With You 02 May 2014 6:33 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. I wondered when the dream would end for Severus. I liked the words of comfort and advice from Lily and James. Sev will likely be looking at Harry differently after that.

    Author's Response: Ugh writing James and Lily made me tear up a little to be honest. So sad. I'm glad you liked there words though. I believe they'd be looking out for him after all of this.
Title: The Beginning 02 May 2014 6:15 am
Reviewer: Annelise (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please please please please do an epilogue!!!! Oh pllleeeeaaassseee!

    Author's Response: Haha thanks for your review! I'm thinking about it, I promise!
Title: I'll Be Your Soldier 02 May 2014 5:54 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    The episode at the Muggle Life Day was scary. James in the hospital with the kids visiting and Severus keeping a vigil was poignant. I wondered what happened though. What happened to Lily and Arthur and who was responsible?

    Author's Response:

    Hey Bridgeportfox!

     You always have good questions. 

    It was a group of pureblood terrorists who were responsible and Arthur and Lily were captured and beaten to threaten them into changing policy, but they were ultimately ok. I was going to add that all in but it was getting so long already and I figured that these fictional pureblood terrorists didn't deserve the attention anyways haha. 

Title: Lean on Me 02 May 2014 5:13 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    The wedding was perfect. I especially enjoyed the comments by Polly and Lily after the toasts. The fight between Lily and James was a good mood switch. No matter how happy a couple is, there are bound to be some bumps along the way. After all the help Sev has gotten from James, it was nice that he was able to help get Lily and James together again. All that and new babies, too.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you like the wedding. The fight was hard to write, but you're write, people have ups and downs and both James and Lily are very passionate people. 

     

    Thanks again for the review!

Title: The Beginning 02 May 2014 3:39 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I'm glad that both their dreams came true in the end.

    Great job and congratulations on finishing this wonderful story.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review Pandora!!!

    I'm glad you liked it!!


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