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Reviews For Visions of Sugarplums Danced in Their Heads
Lily talk about Michael. "This way you won’t have to move Michael until he’s bigger" "I can be here for Polly and Michael when you go back to work" Then later in the chapter, they talk about names and Severus says he will name the baby Michael. The Potters didn't know that earlier, so they could not have called him by name. Author's Response: Good catch!!!!! Whoops. I fixed it. Thanks for letting me know and taking the time to review.
I hope to read a new story from you again, hopefully an AU fic about James, Sirius, Remus and Severus again. (please with an alive Sirius ;-)
Author's Response: The ring scene is one of my favourites so I'm glad you liked it too! Thanks so much for the review!
Author's Response: Haha yes, babies are definitely cuter when they don't cry! Thanks for your review, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Let me know!
Author's Response: Thanks Meg!! Hope you enjoy the rest
Author's Response: old enough to miss the attention he used to get and too young to understand why he isn't getting it now is a perfect way to put it. I don't think James would hire outside help, he loves the chaos too much, and he loves his superdad role. I just think, like everyone, he needs a weekend to sleep and take care of himself. Molly would probably have some good advice for him though!
Author's Response: Hey Fmh, Thanks so much! It's funny, originally there was only meant to be like 5 little vignettes that showed Severus' changes, but I got so obsessed with the world that I kept flushing it out until this happened so I know what you mean about wanting this world to go on. I'm so glad you like it - thanks for always reviewing, that's super awesome of you!
Author's Response: Great question! One I didn't really think of until multiple people started asking me! The ring was in his pocket, but the guards at Azkaban kept it safe with his other possessions. I think he may have tried to give it back to James, I can see him having trouble looking at it after what happened. I think he would have done it so profusely that James would have taken the ring and held it for Severus until he needed it again. Pauline did get proposed to with that ring though :) Thanks for you review! |
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