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Title: Lean on Me 01 May 2014 7:12 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! One small mistake though. When James, Lily, and Sev talk about Sev moving in, both James and
    Lily talk about Michael.

    "This way you won’t have to move Michael until he’s bigger"
    "I can be here for Polly and Michael when you go back to work"

    Then later in the chapter, they talk about names and Severus says he will name the baby Michael. The Potters didn't know that earlier, so they could not have called him by name.

    Author's Response: Good catch!!!!! Whoops. I fixed it. Thanks for letting me know and taking the time to review.
Title: The Beginning 01 May 2014 5:13 pm
Reviewer: kakashi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG I love this story! You really need to write more fics about this patchwork family. I love the friendship between Severus und James! I'm sad that this story ends here. i don't mind for an extra epilog.
    I hope to read a new story from you again, hopefully an AU fic about James, Sirius, Remus and Severus again. (please with an alive Sirius ;-)
Title: The Beginning 01 May 2014 4:52 pm
Reviewer: Meg (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Epilogue please!
Title: The Beginning 01 May 2014 1:16 pm
Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you for that chapter! Beautiful as the visions of the Potter/Snape - family were, I prefer the real world.
Title: I'll Never Drown 01 May 2014 12:34 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love the contrast between James and Snape, especially with regard to searching for a ring and James's 'huggyness'. Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    The ring scene is one of my favourites so I'm glad you liked it too!

     Thanks so much for the review!

Title: Lean on Me 01 May 2014 7:43 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Cute ^.^ I love seeing babies, just so adoriable. At least when they aren't crying. I'm looking forward to reading more.

    Author's Response: Haha yes, babies are definitely cuter when they don't cry! Thanks for your review, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Let me know!
Title: Lean on Me 01 May 2014 7:17 am
Reviewer: Meg (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Im so excited to read all the chapters. :) you've done a great job with this story :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Meg!!

    Hope you enjoy the rest

Title: Like I've Been There Before 01 May 2014 3:56 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, boy! More chapters coming up! I was glad to see everyone rally around Severus with his PTSD. After what he went through at Voldemort's hands, he would need some time to recuperate. The whole situation with Harry was both funny and sad. Poor Harry is old enough to miss the attention he used to get and too young to understand why he isn't getting it now. With another baby on the way, it's going to get even more chaotic. I wonder if James will hire someone to help out? Or ask for Molly for advice? She would understand the situation and could offer some suggestions.

    Author's Response:

    old enough to miss the attention he used to get and too young to understand why he isn't getting it now is a perfect way to put it.

    I don't think James would hire outside help, he loves the chaos too much, and he loves his superdad role. I just think, like everyone, he needs a weekend to sleep and take care of himself. Molly would probably have some good advice for him though!

Title: I'll Never Drown 01 May 2014 12:15 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic chapter I just want this world to go on an on! Thank you

    Author's Response:

    Hey Fmh,

     Thanks so much! It's funny, originally there was only meant to be like 5 little vignettes that showed Severus' changes, but I got so obsessed with the world that I kept flushing it out until this happened so I know what you mean about wanting this world to go on. 

    I'm so glad you like it - thanks for always reviewing, that's super awesome of you!

Title: I'll Never Drown 30 Apr 2014 1:06 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great update! Was the ring still in Snape's pocket when he went to Azkaban? What happened to it?

    Author's Response:

    Great question! One I didn't really think of until multiple people started asking me!

    The ring was in his pocket, but the guards at Azkaban kept it safe with his other possessions. I think he may have tried to give it back to James, I can see him having trouble looking at it after what happened. I think he would have done it so profusely that James would have taken the ring and held it for Severus until he needed it again. Pauline did get proposed to with that ring though :)

     Thanks for you review! 


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