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Title: Movin' On 25 Apr 2014 7:04 am
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Polly and Sev are going to get it on :P

    Author's Response:

    Hahaha bow-chicca-wow-wow

     

     

Title: Movin' On 25 Apr 2014 6:05 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm so glad that I visited P&S tonight and stumbled across this story. I just LOVE it! How I wish that the dream could be a real life for Severus... but maybe this dream will eventually have a bit of reality if Severus learns from it and comes to love Harry in the real world. :-)

    I look forward to the next update, and I will be recommending this story to my friends. Well done!

    Author's Response:

    Hey Rhyselle!

     I'm so glad you love it. I love finding new fanfic that I connect with so I'm so happy I wrote a story you are excited about. 

    I wish this could be reality too, it kind of makes every sweet moment bitter-sweet, but I do think it will be a good learning experience.

    Thank you for recommending my story to your friends! That's really cool of you. I hope you enjoy the next chapters! I'd love to hear what you think

Title: Movin' On 25 Apr 2014 5:53 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Another good chapter. The changes in Severus' life have been so interesting to read. He seems like such a different person. With the book behind him, he is the perfect choice for the DADA position. So moving out and taking a job at Hogwarts seems like the natural turn of events for him. Speaking of the book scene, I loved James' comment that Sev was like a pet gerbil.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I believe compassion and friendship can change a lot about a person, which was the launching pad for this story really. He was also still quite young (21) when he first came to stay with the Potters, so I think that his character was a bit more malleable than if everything had happened years later. Also in a lot of this story he doesnt have the whole Voldemort problem hanging over his head, which I think weighs quite heavily on him in the real world.

     Anyways, sorry for this rambling response. I'm glad you felt that the parting was natural, I wanted him to spread his little wings a bit haha. I'm glad you liked the gerbil comment too. Poor James hates talking about money haha.

Title: Movin' On 25 Apr 2014 3:15 am
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story and appreciate that each chapter is well thought out and well written :) Keep them coming! (Please haha)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Lyzasnape! I always look forward to your reviews. I am so glad you like it. Next chapter should be up soon!

Title: You are Not Alone in This 24 Apr 2014 5:44 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Ugh. James shouldn't have gone to the Ministry to watch Peter's soul get sucked out. At least Severus was able to get through to him. I can see how the two men ended up becoming so close. And now Polly is in the picture. I hope this inspires Severus to change for the better when he wakes up. Though poor Harry would probably have heart failure if Snape starts calling him "Hare-bear."

    Author's Response:

    I know, poor James. He's got a big heart, but Severus is a good friend. I hope it inspires him to be a better person to, I think he'll be conflicted. 

    But yes I agree, Harry is a little too old for Severus to start calling him Hare-bear haha.

Title: You are Not Alone in This 22 Apr 2014 4:57 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter and great story, if only this was the reality for them!

    Author's Response:

    I know! If only!

    Glad you like it :). Thanks for your review!

Title: You are Not Alone in This 22 Apr 2014 12:07 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hahaha, I know exactly what you mean about Russian lit, but I think everyone needs THREE names in that case.

    Thanks for the wonderful chapter; I loved that sev opened up to james in order to help the family. It's really the only circumstances under which I could see that happening. Protective Harry blob was also adorable.

    Will we get a glimpse of what's going on back at hogwarts next chapter? Re-acclimating must be difficult for Harry. How much time has passed since sev reentered the dreamworld? What is the relationship between time in the two worlds?

    Also, will they realize that Sirius was innocent in the real world because of the events in the dreamworld?

    Thanks again for the update and looking forward to reading more.

    Author's Response:

    Hey Anonymous,

    I knew I wanted James and Severus to have a moment where Severus talks about his childhood. James has kind of had a charmed life and is a very good Dad so I think it would be a really horrific thing for him to hear. Especially cause he was such a jerk in high school when Snape was going through all of that.  Even this Severus is so reticent it was hard to create that scenerio. I thought that him needing to bridge a gap between him and James with James not helping at all would have been the only way. So I'm glad that you think it works.

    Hogwarts is a few chapters a way. Time passes very, very quickly (in the first vision, there were under for 15 minutes and it felt like a few days)

     Really good catch about Sirius!!! I didn't know if anyone would think about that. I won't say what will happen with Sirius, but he will make an apperance. 

     

    Thanks for taking the time to review! Keep me updated on your thoughts : )

     

     

Title: You are Not Alone in This 22 Apr 2014 6:35 am
Reviewer: GatewayGirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I adore your alternate timeline characters! I want them to be off being happy in some AU. :-)

    Thanks for this story!

    Author's Response:

    Aw I'm so glad to hear that. Like I said to Moon Willow: Sev's second journey was initially only going to be one or two chapters, but I totally just ran with it and had so much fun crafting this whole other world. I'm glad you like it. I know some people really want the Severus to go back to reality, so it's good to hear people like the AU.

    Thanks for taking the time to review

Title: You are Not Alone in This 21 Apr 2014 7:08 pm
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    I cannot tell you how excited I get every time I see an update for Sugarplums. I love James and Severus interactions so much I think I'm going to hate you when it's time for Severus to come back to reality. :(

    Author's Response:

    Hey Moon Willow

    Not going to lie, James and Severus is my favourite part of this story. Sev's second journey was initially only going to be one or two chapters, but I totally just ran with it and had so much fun crafting this whole other world. I'm glad you like it. I know some people really want the Severus to go back to reality, so it's good to hear.

     Thanks for taking the time to review! Keep me updated on your thoughts if possible. :)

Title: You are Not Alone in This 21 Apr 2014 2:47 pm
Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great Chapter. I especially enjoyed Severus's statement to James that "There is more than one way to mistreat a child" I hope that Severus remembers this when he wakes up in reality.

    Author's Response:

    I hope he remembers too, Mary!!

     Thanks for your review!


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