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Reviews For Visions of Sugarplums Danced in Their Heads
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I look forward to the next update, and I will be recommending this story to my friends. Well done! Author's Response: Hey Rhyselle! I'm so glad you love it. I love finding new fanfic that I connect with so I'm so happy I wrote a story you are excited about. I wish this could be reality too, it kind of makes every sweet moment bitter-sweet, but I do think it will be a good learning experience. Thank you for recommending my story to your friends! That's really cool of you. I hope you enjoy the next chapters! I'd love to hear what you think
Author's Response: Yeah, I believe compassion and friendship can change a lot about a person, which was the launching pad for this story really. He was also still quite young (21) when he first came to stay with the Potters, so I think that his character was a bit more malleable than if everything had happened years later. Also in a lot of this story he doesnt have the whole Voldemort problem hanging over his head, which I think weighs quite heavily on him in the real world. Anyways, sorry for this rambling response. I'm glad you felt that the parting was natural, I wanted him to spread his little wings a bit haha. I'm glad you liked the gerbil comment too. Poor James hates talking about money haha.
Author's Response: Thanks Lyzasnape! I always look forward to your reviews. I am so glad you like it. Next chapter should be up soon!
Author's Response: I know, poor James. He's got a big heart, but Severus is a good friend. I hope it inspires him to be a better person to, I think he'll be conflicted. But yes I agree, Harry is a little too old for Severus to start calling him Hare-bear haha.
Author's Response: I know! If only! Glad you like it :). Thanks for your review!
Thanks for the wonderful chapter; I loved that sev opened up to james in order to help the family. It's really the only circumstances under which I could see that happening. Protective Harry blob was also adorable. Will we get a glimpse of what's going on back at hogwarts next chapter? Re-acclimating must be difficult for Harry. How much time has passed since sev reentered the dreamworld? What is the relationship between time in the two worlds? Also, will they realize that Sirius was innocent in the real world because of the events in the dreamworld? Thanks again for the update and looking forward to reading more. Author's Response: Hey Anonymous, I knew I wanted James and Severus to have a moment where Severus talks about his childhood. James has kind of had a charmed life and is a very good Dad so I think it would be a really horrific thing for him to hear. Especially cause he was such a jerk in high school when Snape was going through all of that. Even this Severus is so reticent it was hard to create that scenerio. I thought that him needing to bridge a gap between him and James with James not helping at all would have been the only way. So I'm glad that you think it works. Hogwarts is a few chapters a way. Time passes very, very quickly (in the first vision, there were under for 15 minutes and it felt like a few days) Really good catch about Sirius!!! I didn't know if anyone would think about that. I won't say what will happen with Sirius, but he will make an apperance.
Thanks for taking the time to review! Keep me updated on your thoughts : )
Thanks for this story! Author's Response: Aw I'm so glad to hear that. Like I said to Moon Willow: Sev's second journey was initially only going to be one or two chapters, but I totally just ran with it and had so much fun crafting this whole other world. I'm glad you like it. I know some people really want the Severus to go back to reality, so it's good to hear people like the AU. Thanks for taking the time to review
Author's Response: Hey Moon Willow Not going to lie, James and Severus is my favourite part of this story. Sev's second journey was initially only going to be one or two chapters, but I totally just ran with it and had so much fun crafting this whole other world. I'm glad you like it. I know some people really want the Severus to go back to reality, so it's good to hear. Thanks for taking the time to review! Keep me updated on your thoughts if possible. :)
Author's Response: I hope he remembers too, Mary!! Thanks for your review! |
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